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Community Story 3
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Nov 3 2008, 12:10 PM EST |
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Change:I'm on a road trip right now so I won't be posting for a while, but I have been doing A LOT of brainstorming in
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Community Story
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Oct 23 2008, 5:03 PM EDT |
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Change:The idea to start the community story belonged to: Ventanator.--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Kuthiani: I figure I have nothing else to do, so why not start this off?Here goes nothing...(This part by: Kuthiani)November 14, 2008Beep Beep BeepWithout picking up my head,
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Community Story 3
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Oct 21 2008, 10:03 PM EDT |
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Change:LeonI asked."Imma e'splain all o' dat later jah? Righ' now joo' wanna be seein' da womens and da chubby one?""Mike's here too?" I instantly knew who he was talking about."Joo' two can follow me." said the black guy. "Come jah?"I was following
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Community Story 3
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Oct 21 2008, 10:01 PM EDT |
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Change:the hell did you come here?”here?"(Alright. I got us into the Depot. Same rule as always)~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~(This part by cj002)Nov.16th 2008We sat around the table sipping Gatorade, we had all agreed not to
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Community Story 3
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Oct 21 2008, 3:35 PM EDT |
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Change:Finally, I heard footsteps around the corner ahead of me. I peeked my head around and saw black boots under some sort of orange suit
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My Profile
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Oct 16 2008, 11:24 PM EDT |
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My Profile
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Oct 16 2008, 4:21 PM EDT |
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Community Story
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Oct 16 2008, 12:44 PM EDT |
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Change:CherylShelly and Frank. We take to the alleyway behind the bar as to not draw attention. Calvin leads, occasionally changing the frequency of his radio,
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My Profile
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Oct 15 2008, 9:01 PM EDT |
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My Profile
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Oct 15 2008, 5:59 PM EDT |
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Community Story
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Oct 15 2008, 8:03 AM EDT |
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Change:a syringe. "I be sorry Mr. Keit..."I didn't feel anything for quite a while... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~To be continued: Anybody can add their own part to the story at anytime. =D. We (Kuthiani and Marsden) will continue if nobody else does.Also, feel free to edit mistakes in grammar/spelling.
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Community Story
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Oct 15 2008, 1:11 AM EDT |
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Change:He was silent for a moment, just standing with his hands in his pockets."Mr. Keit... I need you to trus' me." His smile was gone but his eyes were sincere. I was about to start verbally fighting back, but there was just somethng about him that made me say,
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Community Story
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Oct 15 2008, 1:02 AM EDT |
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Change: "SHRIEEEEEEK!" As I turned around, I saw it headed straight for me. A woman in an orange bio-chemical protection suit. I was tackled to the
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Community Story
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Oct 14 2008, 9:04 PM EDT |
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Change:who she was yelling at, but the only thing that I could see was two men were fighting each other in the midst of defending the position. They were throwing punches and rolling around trying to take control of the other."Your gonna get us all killed!""Hey! Stop
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Community Story Map
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Oct 14 2008, 2:16 PM EDT |
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Change: thank all of those who decided to take time and add to the story. =) (If nobody shows the map within about a week, I will put a crude one up that I created)
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Community Story Map
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Oct 14 2008, 1:54 PM EDT |
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Change:is, should not be shown on the map A Gas Station is in the story An Apartment Complex is in the story The creek that passes by Bill's house (Where Keith dumped the bodies) Should flow through another part of town as well. Military Barriers are currently surrounding the city.
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Community Story Map
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Oct 14 2008, 1:23 PM EDT |
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Change:(Where(Somewhere Simonbetween andCR the318 kidsand getthe too)school.) A big grassy lot is next to County Road 318, and through the woods/across a creek, Bill's house is nearby. County Road 318 has surrounding houses, but is mostly in a wooded environment. The High
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Community Story
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Oct 14 2008, 10:18 AM EDT |
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Change:The man held his hands to his forehead and stood up. He detached a fanny-pack that he had been wearing along with a pistol in
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Community Story
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Oct 14 2008, 9:12 AM EDT |
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Change:The new hole in my left shoulder was excruciatingly painful. Somebody was tending to me already, though. I looked up and I saw the figure
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Community Story
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Oct 14 2008, 8:15 AM EDT |
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Change:I wondered about it, considering that he was a cop."Okay stick together everyone and lets go" he continued. We began to run. I held Heather’s hand, Kelly ran near Calvin while Frank, Shelly and
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