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Dec 30 2009, 1:22 PM EST
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Change: I looked to T.J., who was still in pain, and Gabe and Jessica who were locked in the most compasionate hug i'd ever seen. I
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Dec 30 2009, 12:26 PM EST
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Change: Winters got to his knees and fired a burst from his carbine, and then passed an M16 to Erdrab. Quickly joined by Ozzy, they were
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Dec 30 2009, 11:33 AM EST
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Change: Winters, Erdrab and Ozzy ran back to the vehicle. Erdrab crawled through the vehicle doors and jumped on gun. Thomas got in the passenger seat
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Dec 29 2009, 11:26 PM EST
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Change: It took a screw driver and a few seconds of intense tugging, but we finnaly got the Browning off of the Hummer. I Carried the
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Nov 10 2009, 11:58 AM EST
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Change: The street stretches out ahead of me as my M4 illuminates an erie path with its flashlight. Command fell under zombie attack 3 days ago
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Oct 25 2009, 8:39 PM EDT
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Oct 25 2009, 8:02 PM EDT
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Change: Four hours or so after the blast the scratching ceases and is replaced by gun fire. I reach franticlly at all of the rubble i
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Oct 24 2009, 10:28 PM EDT
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Change: crazyteddy36)(Hey, why not. but just promise me one thing. if we ever make this into a movie, we need to a fight song to come
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Oct 19 2009, 12:30 PM EDT
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Change: As i slide to my knees the first wave walks through the door safety off i take as many headshots as I can No use!
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Oct 19 2009, 11:57 AM EDT
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Change: I'm not going to let this happen again. I slump aimlessly into a wall with my weapon cradled between my legs. My head hangs and
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Oct 16 2009, 9:45 PM EDT
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Change: I nodded and T.J. didn't say anything, but then he turned to me. "I'm not following your orders. No one here should. what makes you
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Oct 15 2009, 9:50 PM EDT
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Change: . I took a look out of the door. or what was the door, and saw the creature barrelling at me at full speed. I
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Oct 13 2009, 9:34 PM EDT
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Change: "On our way." I said. I turned to the rest of them. "T.J. Kieth, Victor, I need you guy's to follow me. Ozzy, you stay
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Oct 11 2009, 9:40 PM EDT
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Change: a whole day. god I was glad I had survived that long. now we were in good shape. good weapons, about five people to man
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Oct 11 2009, 6:45 AM EDT
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Change: above my head."NO, NO, NO!! I'M HUMAN!"All of the guns lowered and a man with an assault rifle greeted me."You and the girl need somwhere to stay?""Yes sir. I just want her safe I'll go somewhere els-""You can both stay"We got out
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Oct 11 2009, 6:41 AM EDT
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Change: I hung up the phone, shouldered the duffel bag, and peeked outside. All clear. I snatched Jessica's car keys and ushered her out the door.
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Sep 21 2009, 9:02 PM EDT
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Change: "Alright, the hummer broke down, so all we can do now is get back inside and defend ourselves." I said. "We brought weapons, and supplies,
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Change: At the moment, I had never felt more powerfull. I was behind the wheel of one of the biggest vehicles I'd ever been behind, had
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Change: hand and ran after him."Look man, I'm sorry, but this isn't the time, or the place to be upset." I said grabbing him by the shoulder and turning him around. "We can mourn later." he nodded and holstered his pistol."I saw on the
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