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	Date/Time	Made By	Edit Note	Type	Scope
	Jul 8 2010, 12:30 PM EDT	Gears101		edit
Change: There were only format changes (bold, italics, etc.) in this version. See this version for details. (Word count: 12888)
	Dec 30 2009, 1:22 PM EST	Gears101	I finish the story.	edit	364 words added
Change: I looked to T.J., who was still in pain, and Gabe and Jessica who were locked in the most compasionate hug i'd ever seen. I View changes from previous version. (Word count: 12888)
	Dec 30 2009, 12:26 PM EST	Gears101		edit	323 words added
Change: Winters got to his knees and fired a burst from his carbine, and then passed an M16 to Erdrab. Quickly joined by Ozzy, they were View changes from previous version. (Word count: 12513)
	Dec 30 2009, 11:33 AM EST	Gears101		edit	1141 words added
Change: Winters, Erdrab and Ozzy ran back to the vehicle. Erdrab crawled through the vehicle doors and jumped on gun. Thomas got in the passenger seat View changes from previous version. (Word count: 12186)
	Dec 29 2009, 11:26 PM EST	Gears101	I stop so I can email the guys and see what they want to do.	edit	1320 words added 2 words deleted
Change: It took a screw driver and a few seconds of intense tugging, but we finnaly got the Browning off of the Hummer. I Carried the View changes from previous version. (Word count: 11033)
	Nov 10 2009, 11:58 AM EST	crazyteddy36	new character feel free to send an email if you want him as yours keep workin on this guys great story.	edit	246 words added
Change: The street stretches out ahead of me as my M4 illuminates an erie path with its flashlight. Command fell under zombie attack 3 days ago View changes from previous version. (Word count: 9689)
	Oct 25 2009, 8:39 PM EDT	Gears101		edit
Change: There were only format changes (bold, italics, etc.) in this version. See this version for details. (Word count: 9443)
	Oct 25 2009, 8:02 PM EDT	crazyteddy36	yeah im almost back in the battle	edit	171 words added
Change: Four hours or so after the blast the scratching ceases and is replaced by gun fire. I reach franticlly at all of the rubble i View changes from previous version. (Word count: 9443)
	Oct 24 2009, 10:28 PM EDT	Gears101		edit	337 words added 1 word deleted
Change: crazyteddy36)(Hey, why not. but just promise me one thing. if we ever make this into a movie, we need to a fight song to come View changes from previous version. (Word count: 9272)
	Oct 19 2009, 12:30 PM EDT	crazyteddy36	Left yall with some good action i wanna hear bout your guyses take on the firefight.	edit	636 words added
Change: As i slide to my knees the first wave walks through the door safety off i take as many headshots as I can No use! View changes from previous version. (Word count: 8931)
	Oct 19 2009, 11:57 AM EDT	crazyteddy36	didnt add much but amazing progress keep it up	edit	118 words added
Change: I'm not going to let this happen again. I slump aimlessly into a wall with my weapon cradled between my legs. My head hangs and View changes from previous version. (Word count: 8291)
	Oct 16 2009, 9:45 PM EDT	Gears101		edit	102 words added 7 words deleted
Change: I nodded and T.J. didn't say anything, but then he turned to me. "I'm not following your orders. No one here should. what makes you View changes from previous version. (Word count: 8170)
	Oct 15 2009, 9:50 PM EDT	Gears101		edit	555 words added
Change: . I took a look out of the door. or what was the door, and saw the creature barrelling at me at full speed. I View changes from previous version. (Word count: 8070)
	Oct 13 2009, 9:34 PM EDT	Gears101		edit	322 words added 1 word deleted
Change: "On our way." I said. I turned to the rest of them. "T.J. Kieth, Victor, I need you guy's to follow me. Ozzy, you stay View changes from previous version. (Word count: 7503)
	Oct 11 2009, 9:40 PM EDT	Gears101	i work on stuff, leaving room for more later	edit	372 words added 1 word deleted
Change: a whole day. god I was glad I had survived that long. now we were in good shape. good weapons, about five people to man View changes from previous version. (Word count: 7179)
	Oct 11 2009, 6:45 AM EDT	Gabriel_Vengeance		edit	8 words added 6 words deleted
Change: above my head."NO, NO, NO!! I'M HUMAN!"All of the guns lowered and a man with an assault rifle greeted me."You and the girl need somwhere to stay?""Yes sir. I just want her safe I'll go somewhere els-""You can both stay"We got out View changes from previous version. (Word count: 6799)
	Oct 11 2009, 6:41 AM EDT	Gabriel_Vengeance		edit	1123 words added
Change: I hung up the phone, shouldered the duffel bag, and peeked outside. All clear. I snatched Jessica's car keys and ushered her out the door. View changes from previous version. (Word count: 6797)
	Sep 21 2009, 9:02 PM EDT	Gears101	I finish some final touches and stop to let people add in more for their parts	edit	134 words added 1 word deleted
Change: "Alright, the hummer broke down, so all we can do now is get back inside and defend ourselves." I said. "We brought weapons, and supplies, View changes from previous version. (Word count: 5636)
	Sep 21 2009, 8:09 PM EDT	Gears101		edit	501 words added 1 word deleted
Change: At the moment, I had never felt more powerfull. I was behind the wheel of one of the biggest vehicles I'd ever been behind, had View changes from previous version. (Word count: 5500)
	Sep 21 2009, 7:15 PM EDT	Gears101		edit	64 words added
Change: hand and ran after him."Look man, I'm sorry, but this isn't the time, or the place to be upset." I said grabbing him by the shoulder and turning him around. "We can mourn later." he nodded and holstered his pistol."I saw on the View changes from previous version. (Word count: 4997)

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