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Change: back story behind the cause of the Infection*AgEnT_GrEEn:Apparently the Basement Incident got a little out of hand...Well, a lot out of hand. That shit**** was supposed to be taken care of by the HAZMAT team
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Nov 7 2008, 2:07 AM EST
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Change: Amy*Leans a bit closer, looking me square in the eyes, with a quiet tone to her voice*: You know nobody's listening or watching us, right? You don't have to be so difficult. Me:Me*trying to throw her off*: what makes you think I like you, I'm not into chicks like-
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Oct 30 2008, 2:22 PM EDT
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Change: The only thing I could think about for the rest of the day was meeting her after work. It was almost agonizing having to wait
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Oct 30 2008, 7:25 AM EDT
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Change: Amy: *Giggles, then looks at her watch and realizes she's gone over her lunchbreak* Ooh, I gotta go, um, meet me by Hot Topic after work, ok?Me: *Dumbfounded* Uhh, yeah, alright.Amy: *Gets up, pushes in her chair and tosses
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Oct 30 2008, 12:04 AM EDT
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Change: a couple weeks before the 16th of December so I could get some of that good food to eat, check out the ladies and keep an eye out for
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Oct 29 2008, 11:59 PM EDT
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Change: time.....Many thank-yous to SkipNChurch, who supplied me with the ideas for the backstory behind the cause of the Infection*AgEnT_GrEEn:Apparently the Bowman Incident got a little out of hand...Well, a lot out of hand.
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Oct 29 2008, 6:45 PM EDT
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Change: 2723 at the time of the Outbreak….I was working at the Great Lakes Crossing Mall as a Public Safety Officer. My duties were to bust
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Oct 29 2008, 6:24 PM EDT
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Change: is dually writen by AgEnT_GrEEn and dizzdeathwing. Also, it's writtem more as a recollection than an actual story for exhaustive reasons although there will be detailed segments from time to time*AgEnT_GrEEn:Apparently the Bowman Incident got a little out of
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Oct 24 2008, 5:21 AM EDT
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Change: always went by the Hot Topic before closing to see if I could get the guts to talk to her, but I always chickened out when she looked at me...Anyways, I was scarfing down 4 Beef 'n Cheedars, 2 curly
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Oct 24 2008, 4:52 AM EDT
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Change: the mess as they've always done for freak accidents, but that didn't work out as the Specialists were discharged since the Government went broke and
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Oct 22 2008, 8:46 AM EDT
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Change: for those?Amy *flirty-like*: I'm broke, but I can give you my number.Me *losing my cool* Uhm, this isn't the right ti-Amy: *almost psychically*: Meet me by the Rainforest Cafe, closing time, SHARP.Me *speechless* : ...Amy *giggles, then gets up and leaves with my fries*
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Oct 22 2008, 8:31 AM EDT
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Change: I glared at her, but she smiled at me. I felt somewhat uneasy then, especially since she was giving off that 'I want to get to know you and get your number' aura.....Our conversation went something like this:Amy: Hi.Me. ...Amy: You're not scaring
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Oct 22 2008, 8:08 AM EDT
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Change: I met her a couple weeks prior to the 16th while I was on lunch break, [for the second time that day since big muscular
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Oct 22 2008, 7:34 AM EDT
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Change: It was humiliating in a sense, we were at the highest point in our careers, only to be knocked down to an entry-level job. Oh
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Oct 19 2008, 6:35 PM EDT
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Change: in the Army where we stayed sometogether sleep*though all the transfers, all the good times and bad...Everything. So naturally we followed each other outside the Service as well, to our native Michigan, working Public Safety Officer positions at the Great Lakes Crossing Mall.
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Oct 17 2008, 4:36 AM EDT
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Change: As we strolled out looking like crackshot UmbrellaCorp. operatives, the 6 other survivors came power-walking down the shopping corridor, armed to the teeth as well.
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Aug 7 2008, 4:35 AM EDT
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Change: clean the place out….Over” “Well, where are we going after we gank the chopper? The National Guard will shoot us down if we try to go for
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Aug 7 2008, 4:03 AM EDT
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Change: Afterwards, I kindly gave my comrades the following order: “Let’s rest lightly, we need to be byat the airport by dawnmid-morning or earlier….Tim and I’ll try to actually trick the fools into thinking we’re
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Aug 7 2008, 3:47 AM EDT
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Change: story...I've chopped the story up into chapters so your eyes won't burn out and bleed.Intro:The name’s Jack Mandel and I was 21 at the time of the Outbreak….I was working at
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Aug 7 2008, 3:44 AM EDT
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Change: Rendezvous, Part OneRendezvousAs we strolled out looking like crackshot UmbrellaCorp. operatives, the 6 other survivors came power-walking down the shopping corridor, armed to the teeth
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