Thread started: Oct 29 2008, 6:43 PM EDT
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Read what's there first, then continue reading this thread or you'll be lost otherwise. Basically, the story's gonna be about mall survival versus the crap that was there before. I'd like PMs or posts telling me what you like and don't like, what I could do better, things like that.
I look forward to the feedback : )
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RE: Good "hook", work some on your setup
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Nov 30 2008, 7:18 PM EST
"Skip, the only difficulty I'm having is how I introduce the Skinnies...I want to take a more novel approach.
I'm trying to avoid the 'Main character stumbles across scene of a few Skinjobs eating a helpless person but blows it off until it's too late but miraculously is able to find some deathdealer gun or sword and knocks the Skinnies back to Hell' intro-middle-end scenario...
You said you've done fiction before; what would you do at this point? Anyone else's input right now is useful to me also :)" um you could get a "prank" call that goes blank as a person screams in the background on your walkie talkie and ignore but it keeps on naging at you
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