Change: I was the first to hit the ground, lightly jogging up to the roof access door. Ryman brought up the "body bunker," a large bullet-resistant   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 2913)

Change: Spotless machinery contrasted with the furniture littering the brightly lit room. Research material sprawled accross desks and foam cups still steaming with coffee indicated vigorous   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 0)

Change: There were the other, "normal" avenues, such as the massive pub to the North East, countless cobbled together wood stalls selling rifles and swords alongside potatoes and onions - at sale price, of course. Even, the occasional backyard doctor / drug dealer.An armor shop sounded   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 18909)

Change: John_234 republished the Oct 2 2009, 9:09 PM EDT version by John_234 Oct 3 2009, 12:11 AM EDT

Change: There were the other, "normal" avenues, such as the massive pub to the North East, countless cobbled together wood stalls selling rifles and swords alongside potatoes and onions - at sale price, of course. Even, the occasional backyard doctor / drug dealer.An armor shop sounded   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 18905)

Change: There were the other, "normal" avenues, such as the massive pub to the North East, countless cobbled together wood stalls selling rifles and swords alongside potatoes and onions - at sale price, of course. Even, the occasional backyard doctor / drug dealer.An armor shop sounded   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 18875)

Change: *******fu.cking throat. My arms snapped out of unconsciousness and twisted the limb away. "****"*Sh.it man, let go!" Jack wrenched away from my clawing hands and jumped to his feet. "Christ, I was trying to take your pulse and you go ape ****!"sh.it!" I sat   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 18889)

Change: Two nervous flights brought me to a dark row of closed doors and covered windows.The LED light on my belt threw shifting illumination and darkness upon long neglected metals and peeling paint.paint as I climbed two flights.I inched toward room 109. Unsurprisingly, the frigid, long untouchedfrigid   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 15849)

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Change: scientist that we we able to prep a team in a timely fashion.researcher.We? Yes, I was one of the god-forsakenforsaken bastards assigned to that raid.---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Ch1: Raid on the non-existent "Quotes are open speech.""Italicized quotes are radio chatter." For a day so   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 15826)