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Feb 5 2011, 2:01 PM EST
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Change: belivebelieve that it will stop him from turning. What did you say your name was?" "Miho Horri." The name struck me. I knew her from some where. The next thing that struck
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Jul 22 2008, 2:49 PM EDT
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Change: Renamed from Always keep fighting by Jul 22 2008, 2:49 PM EDT for: Added capitals to words
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Jul 14 2008, 4:21 PM EDT
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Change: in my life. I wonder if I have to listenremember tomy Jordanwhole alllife day.""Shutthrough upflashbacks. I Brian,"mean, hewhat shotif back.I reallyremember needbeing trained to pickuse the bettertoilet? flashTHAT backswould andbe times.embarrassing.
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Jul 6 2008, 9:55 PM EDT
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Change: I wasn't worried about the hole in the back of my house since it lead directly to my backyard. However, I decided to go scavenge
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Jun 24 2008, 9:59 PM EDT
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Change: The gunshots got louder and louder. Finally, I rounded a street corner. A small group of zombies shambled quickly to the other side, but I
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Jun 24 2008, 9:31 PM EDT
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Change: Renamed from Allways keep fighting by Jun 24 2008, 9:31 PM EDT for: Spelling Error
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Jun 3 2008, 11:54 PM EDT
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Change: the zombies were attacking. I started to jog and walk to where my insticts led me. They were pretty reliable due the fact I could now hear gunfire in the distance. I held the Beretta in both hands, thumbed the saftey, and started to move cautiously.
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Jun 3 2008, 4:08 PM EDT
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Change: That was it. I must have gotten knocked out at the end. But there were slight inconsistencies. Why the heck would the soldiers give us
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Jun 3 2008, 3:47 PM EDT
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Change: Note that I'm still editing most of the ideas "Is he dead?" My mind swarmed with thoughts. Thoughts that scared me. I don't know how, but I was lying
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Jun 1 2008, 11:31 PM EDT
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Change: "Everyone move!""Riley's down!" Riley. She was a girl I knew who I think had a crush on one of my friends."No! Erin get back!" Erin in turn was one of Rileys close friends. I think."Let me go!" Yup. She was her friend alright. "Everyone clear!""Let's move!"
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Jun 1 2008, 11:06 PM EDT
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Change: sent soldiers. A group of Strykers was coming, but the soldiers had to hold the line. I looked around. Less than 40 kids. "The Strykers are here!"
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May 31 2008, 11:53 PM EDT
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Change: As I came into the street, I noticed who quiet the place was. Aside from zombies, nothing was moving. Even the air was still. There
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May 31 2008, 12:21 PM EDT
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Change: I stumbled back into real life and opened up the yearbook, searching for the names I recalled. Slowly, but surely, I remembered what people looked
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May 31 2008, 12:03 AM EDT
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Change: I almost tore it open and its contents spilled on the floor. A school yearbook, photos, and a letter fell into a heap. I opened up the letter, and another piece of my former life came back to me.Diversity training. May, 2008"Exactly what are you
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May 26 2008, 11:38 PM EDT
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Change: going to attack now. Right? Eagerly, I ran up the stairs turned left, and ended back up in the room I started in. Shaking off thoughts of my past, I went into the closet and opened up the floorboard. Sure enough, there was a package.
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May 22 2008, 9:18 PM EDT
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Change: "What a wonderful day for this to happen," exclaimed Tim. I nodded agreement. Normally, this would the last day of school, and everyone would be
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Apr 17 2008, 11:55 PM EDT
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Change: "Is he dead?" My mind swarmed with thoughts. Thoughts that scared me. I don't know how, but I was lying on the ground, unable to
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Apr 17 2008, 11:47 PM EDT
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Change: Created by Apr 17 2008, 11:47 PM EDT for: no reason given
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