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Change: Modellever-action 94 had handed off his pump to Kimbal. She took some of Vince's shells and topped it off. Vince chose a mac-10, and grabbed some
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Change: doordoor. The trio stopped in front of the door, their weapons of choice in-hand. Clyde chambered a round into his Coonan, preferring to keep the
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Change: - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Vince opened the door slowly
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Change: Location: New York City, New York, USA Climate: Slightly overcast Time: 12:45 PM "Which floor, buddy?" Svetlana stood at the edge of the building's roof
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Change: KorbinKimbal to help," Clyde suggested. "No, I'm fine," O'Donell pleaded, "Really," he said to dismiss the look of suspicion on Clyde’s face. Can you hurry up?" Kimbal shouted from outside the room. A sigh escaped both of them, though they skipped straight to business. "Search the other
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Change: Clyde looked out at his surroundings, and the feeling of disappointment was obviously felt by all. Suddenly, everyone had realized the difficulty brought on by
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Change: gun, noting it looked similar to what Korbin and Kimbal carried.. O'Donell looked at her and said, "Its only got fiveten shots, so make 'em count." Lana stared at the weapon and nodded solmenly.solemnly. "Okay," Korbin said as he checked his
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Change: republished the Jul 13 2010, 1:39 AM EDT version by Jul 13 2010, 2:36 PM EDT
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Change: fsck!?fvck!? Get outta here you freak!" The bald guy shouted at the strange man. The resulting roar from the peeper sent shivers down Jack's spine, but, feeling cocky, he taunted his new acquaintance. "Hey fruitcake, how about a a little hike!?"A swift kick from
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Change: fsckin'fvckin' janitor."Location: Burton, MichiganClimate: Sunny and windy.Date: 8 / 17 / 11Time: 16:21People really like to imagine when true disaster strikes, they're well prepared, ready to help their friends and loved ones. Sitting on the sh*tter with your pants literally around your ankles was
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Change: 8 / 17 / 11Time: 16:21People really like to imagine when true disaster strikes, they're well prepared, ready to help their friends and loved ones. Sitting on the sh*tter with your pants literally around your ankles was not, what Jack had envisioned.
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Change: O'Donell not pointing her gun at theO'Donell. perp.The Heperp walked to the door anddoor, asked,asking, "Is your buddy good? Sounded like that thing on the floor bit him... You may want to cap it." O'Donell spoke up this time, "You want us to just KILL
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