Change: OHCRAP-OHCRAP-OHCRAP!'OHCRAP-OHCRAP-OHCRAP!'. Instead of his expected response, he laughed, shook my hand, and congratulated me on a game well played."Where'd you learn to shoot like that?" He asked"I mustn't have told you, I likedlived in Canada for most of my life, and I hunted a lot.""Oh,   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 8627)

Change: paint balls. Before he could shoot me though, I shot him twice in the face, effectively blinding him by coating his mask with paint. That’s what you get for not going down the first time I thought. Him and his buddy held   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 8625)

Change:  time. I threw my pistol at the nearest zombie, turned, ran,ran andtowards jumpedthe offbuilding ofadjacent to the edgeone ofI thewas building.on, and jumped. It wasn’t yet my time. The End   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 8623)

Change: swung my hand over and shut it off. I sat up in bed, stretching and yawning. I should really stop watching those zombie movies I told myself. I looked over my shoulder to the other side of   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 8620)

Change: “OW!” yelled Nicky behind me. I turned to see her lying on the stairs, her leg twisted at an impossible angle. I placed her arm   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 8620)

Change: Remember, this is only the beginning of my story, so please leave some positive critique or constructive criticism. The man in the story is not me, and all of these events are fictional and any resemblance to people, dead, undead, or alive, or places past or present is entirely coincidental.   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 7199)

Change: bikedbikes fell over, tossing their riders. Those didn’t do any serious damage. About a month ago, we found a dead military convoy. We had scavenged explosives, which Kurt had set up for us. Those did more damage. The claymores sent riders and bikes flying through the air, aflame. Some   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 7340)

Change: Renamed from Dominckmagas's story by Marsden Jul 22 2008, 2:59 PM EDT for: You don't need to put an "S" after an apostrophe if the word already ended in an "S"

Change: her that we had a fairly secure shelter just out of town. That’s how we met Angie. CHAPTER 8 COMING SOONI'll add more soon, don't worry I'll try to add more tomorrow   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 5646)

Change:  George George was coughing and sputtering. We heard Dion whisper something, and as we rounded the corner, he was out of our sight. BANG. The sound echoed through the streets. We decided to give him some time with George’s body when- BANG A second shot rang through the air.   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 5631)