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Change: "Alex, look out!" Cowboy said, pointing towards the open door to the house. My vision had just about returned at this point, so when I
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Change: Sig."Nice gun, Alex." I commented. "Why don't you use that instead of the POS Deagle?" In response, he shrugged."Didn't seem as cool." Despite himself, he smirked. "Whatever you say." I said, then lead them inside. Everyone crowded into the kitchen to get a good look at the "badasses."
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Change: Sig."Nice gun, Alex." I commented. "Why don't you use that instead of the POS Deagle?" In response, he shrugged."Didn't seem as cool." Despite himself, he smirked. "Whatever you say." I said, then lead them inside. Everyone crowded into the kitchen to get a good look at the "badasses."
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Change: “Sir, I can’t.” I replied, trying to keep my tone even. I glanced to my right, and saw that the one named Alex had lowered his Deagle. Good. “We might be able to share a little bit, but we NEED this food. I CAN’T let it go.”“SHUT UP!”
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Change: The other guy looked even stupider. He was pretty tall, but also quite fat. His face looked like melted wax, and he had a bushy,
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Change: I tried to sit up, but it felt as if my head was burning, so I begrudgingly lay back down. Easing my head around to
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Change: raining."raining?""Matt." Grandma said. "If someone as old as me can stand the rain, I think you can. C'mon; it's better to do it today than worry about doing it tomorrow.""Fair enough." I said. "Miranda, you okay with this?""I was in the marines, pal." She
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Change: From behind me, I heard a rifle crack several times. As the raiders returned fire, I turned and saw Mom ducking back into the garage.
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Change: "That's two!" I slowed, turning the truck around to look for more targets. Then, I heard a pop, and the wheel jerked. ****! They'd gotten
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