Change: "Alex, look out!" Cowboy said, pointing towards the open door to the house. My vision had just about returned at this point, so when I   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 17473)

Change: Sig."Nice gun, Alex." I commented. "Why don't you use that instead of the POS Deagle?" In response, he shrugged."Didn't seem as cool." Despite himself, he smirked. "Whatever you say." I said, then lead them inside.Everyone crowded into the kitchen to get a good look at the "badasses."   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 14713)

Change: The other guy looked even stupider. He was pretty tall, but also quite fat. His face looked like melted wax, and he had a bushy,   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 14994)

Change: raining."raining?""Matt." Grandma said. "If someone as old as me can stand the rain, I think you can. C'mon; it's better to do it today than worry about doing it tomorrow.""Fair enough." I said. "Miranda, you okay with this?""I was in the marines, pal." She   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 4622)

Change: "That's two!" I slowed, turning the truck around to look for more targets. Then, I heard a pop, and the wheel jerked. ****! They'd gotten   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 3784)