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Change: I ran to my house with Paul and Rain following me. I threw the door open and killed the zombie that was trying to beat
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Change: said. "Okay," Paul said. We spent the next few hours welding steel plates over the long box trailer that we had decided to use instead of a joined trailer. The longer trailer gave us a lot of cargo room, which would be useful in R&S.
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Jul 18 2008, 11:20 PM EDT
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Change: There were only format changes (bold, italics, etc.) in this version. See this version for details.
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Jul 18 2008, 10:24 PM EDT
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Change: sides and back of the trailer, and shuttered firing ports set in to allow people to fire rifles out should do it." I said. "Okay," Paul said.
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Change: "No, the trailer has to be able"If to swingwe onfind thea fifthsmaller wheel,trailer orso you can'tcan make corners very easily."corners." I said. "Okay," Paul said. "As I figure it, two
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Change: I set the MRE in front of Paul and sat down. He looked at Jennifer. "So where did you two meet?" He asked. "We have
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Change: "Whoa! did you have any people out?" Herb asked, looking through his binoculars. "Why?" I asked. "Because I can see the U-Haul." He said. "Oh,
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Change: "Rain, take my left, Riley is on the right." I said. We walked into the fog and I yelled at the zombies to get their
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Jul 11 2008, 10:46 AM EDT
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Change: We drove to the center of town, where Command & Control was situated at the local police station. I parked the jeep, and we walked
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Jul 11 2008, 2:48 AM EDT
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Change: prepared." She said, smiling. "Are we going out for supplies already?" She asked as we walked out to the jeep. "No just some zombies moving around outside of town." I said.
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Change: combat boots. "You've been planing this, haven't you?" I asked. "Fortune favors the prepared." She said, smiling. "Are we going out for supplies already?" She asked as we walked out to the jeep.
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Jul 10 2008, 2:45 PM EDT
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Change: The next morning I woke up early, kissed Jennifer good by, and woke up Rain. She got her equipment together, and I looked over my
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Change: "Okay team one, drug store, we need anti-biotics. Team two, gas station fill up the gas cans that you brought. team three, meet us at
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Change: that carried the supplies completed the lineup. "Alright, Move out!" I said into the radio. The ten minute drive to the closet town was uneventful and when we pulled into town every thing was quite.
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Change: go with you this time?" Rain asked. "When you turn sixteen." I said. I found Rain hiding from a group of zombies in a gutter
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Change: Created by Jul 10 2008, 3:45 AM EDT for: no reason given
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