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| kuthiani | Tips on good writing. | 2 | Apr 3 2010, 5:14 PM EDT by Jackhorse | ||
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Thread started: Oct 21 2008, 1:10 PM EDT
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Don't know if anyone will give the time to read this, but it's something I try to abide by.
1.) Your characters need flaws. It's so incredibly boring to read about characters that can "do anything they want to". 2.) Your characters need goals. All actions have a reaction. All reactions have a chance to make a new action. It's also incredibly boring to just have your character wait for something to happen. 3.) Don't waste time on useless titles. Ex: "I pulled out my double-barreled missle launching scoped scattershot/slug optional grenade launching cybo-arm brand .333 mega rifle and prepared for the invasion." (although it's ALRIGHT to show the importance of a certain item or weapon, nobody wants to read about how awesome it is. It makes your character more powerful than they need to be.) |
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| chezmonkey | Problem | 5 | Feb 21 2010, 2:00 AM EST by IanKaplan | ||
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Thread started: Jan 20 2010, 9:51 PM EST
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On my computer, it is all cut off at the edge, and there is no horizontal scroll bar. How can i read it now?
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| humanroach | story idea (page: 1 2 3 4 5 ... last page) | 124 | Jul 17 2009, 9:50 PM EDT by zombiehunter14 | ||
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Thread started: May 14 2009, 10:54 PM EDT
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I have a great idea for the next community story. the problem is that im not a writer, but i do have a great plot, and i would like to submit it to you so you all can develope it. here's the plot:
a fanatical enviromental group who specializes in enviromental research of lots of things also secretly does viral research. they develop a zombie virus and plan to infect humanity to stop global pollution. they also have created a vaccine for the virus but its only effective to prevent infection. they have given it to selected members of their group to preserve themselves and a "higher human race" (they think). the only thing in their way is zombie survivor fanatics. they dont want us preserving humanity and civilization through the zombie outbreak. so they begin assassinating members of ZSDW. many of the members are killed and noone notices but when SKIPnCHURCH is killed it draws the attention of the rest of the survivors because SKIP made a last minute warning post. but SKIP doesnt go down without a KICKASS gun fight. now the members of ZSDW (John123 and 3DA leading the group) are investigating SKIP's misterious death and discover the evil plan, but not in enough time to stop it. now ZSDW has to deal with the ZED, evil tree hugger group, to steal their vaccine to vaccinate themselves and the rest of humanity before all hope is lost. what do you think? |
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