Old Community Story: Part 5

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	Date/Time	Made By	Edit Note	Type	Scope
	Jul 8 2010, 8:47 PM EDT	John_234	Rename	rename	No content added or deleted.
Change: Renamed from Community Story: Part 5 by John_234 Jul 8 2010, 8:47 PM EDT for: Rename
	Aug 7 2009, 8:08 AM EDT	ironhand	lock requested by nexus_oblivion	lock	No content added or deleted.
Change: Locked by ironhand Aug 7 2009, 8:08 AM EDT for: lock requested by nexus_oblivion
	Jun 25 2009, 3:27 AM EDT	Nexus_Oblivion	"youshallnotpass" just got owned. . .	edit
Change: There were only format changes (bold, italics, etc.) in this version. See this version for details. (Word count: 39041)
	Jun 24 2009, 6:59 PM EDT	youshallnotpass		edit
Change: There were only format changes (bold, italics, etc.) in this version. See this version for details. (Word count: 39041)
	May 11 2009, 8:12 AM EDT	Nexus_Oblivion		edit	3896 words added 9 words deleted
Change: "You should’ve shot me in the head boy," Dad remarks. He reveals a zipper which I hadn’t seen, running down his pants. He pulls it View changes from previous version. (Word count: 39041)
	Apr 29 2009, 6:54 PM EDT	xombiez		edit
Change: There were only format changes (bold, italics, etc.) in this version. See this version for details. (Word count: 35033)
	Apr 29 2009, 6:53 PM EDT	xombiez	new piece! w00t!	edit	1050 words added
Change: "No, you'll be working stealth. We need you both out alive. Now, heres the plan. We are going to continue out of here, there's not View changes from previous version. (Word count: 35033)
	Apr 22 2009, 11:21 AM EDT	matt_will	Minor changes and because some was deleted	edit	13 words added 14 words deleted
Change: two remaing grenadesgrenade away in my robe and turn to face my friends as they come to capture the Americans. “Well we cleaned that up,” says Calvin, “but how the hell do we get out?” (It took me long enough, right? Anyway, View changes from previous version. (Word count: 33941)
	Apr 19 2009, 5:21 AM EDT	matt_will		edit
Change: There were only format changes (bold, italics, etc.) in this version. See this version for details. (Word count: 33944)
	Apr 18 2009, 8:27 PM EDT	Crashr	slight adjustments	edit	7 words added 5 words deleted
Change: two remaing grenades away in my robe and turn to face my friends as they come to capture the Americans. “Well we cleaned that up,” says Calvin, “but how the hell do we get out?” (It took me long enough, right? Anyway, here View changes from previous version. (Word count: 33944)
	Apr 18 2009, 3:50 PM EDT	Crashr	Posted mine and matt_will's parts	edit	3458 words added
Change: As I take cover, I see some of Freya’s group on the right side of the depot. They are looking for American targets, and I View changes from previous version. (Word count: 33942)
	Apr 15 2009, 9:04 PM EDT	Nexus_Oblivion	added matt_wills part	edit	1668 words added
Change: "Well done, I must say, but you will have to do more than that if you want you and you’re friends to survive." I think View changes from previous version. (Word count: 30388)
	Apr 15 2009, 7:09 AM EDT	Nexus_Oblivion	edited my story	edit	16 words added 9 words deleted
Change: decide to blow the entire corridor, killing everyone or....kill the four soldiers in the other room. Your choice.""I won’t do it...""But you will," Dad exclaims."Why are doing this?" I ask."Because there’s nothing left to lose," he replies, "I’ve already sent the View changes from previous version. (Word count: 28689)
	Apr 15 2009, 1:21 AM EDT	Nexus_Oblivion		edit	2535 words added
Change: He points to two of the soldiers and then at another. Some kind of crazy hand signals follow and the two soldiers led the way, View changes from previous version. (Word count: 28682)
	Apr 14 2009, 10:31 PM EDT	kuthiani		edit	1 word added 1 word deleted
Change: (Five(Seven days ago)In seven days, it's going to be Thanksgiving.My brother promised me that he'd be here.My name is Craig Leatherman. My brother Frank and his daughter live in Bowman.I haven't been able to get a hold of him on the phone. I've been View changes from previous version. (Word count: 26038)
	Apr 13 2009, 4:07 PM EDT	kuthiani		edit	2347 words added
Change: While we ate from a stockpile of food which was on a table, we learned about how each of these people came to the house. View changes from previous version. (Word count: 26038)
	Apr 12 2009, 11:57 PM EDT	kuthiani		edit	1497 words added
Change: Carefully, I lowered myself from the surface on which I was sitting. With both feet now on the ground, I could see the person in front of me. He was short and kind of fat, with blond hair. Through his glasses, his eyes seemed to express fright."White?""Yeah... View changes from previous version. (Word count: 23639)
	Apr 3 2009, 2:40 PM EDT	kuthiani		edit	1071 words added
Change: He never liked being away from Master, especially with such a awful stench overwhelming the other smells in the air. Not as bad as ‘that View changes from previous version. (Word count: 22116)
	Mar 27 2009, 8:17 PM EDT	Nexus_Oblivion	format changes	edit	2 words added 2 words deleted
Change: 1817November 24th 2008Time: 02:58PM‘ The horse he sweats with fear we break to run The mighty roar of the Russian guns And as we race towards the human wall The screams of pain as my comrades fall. ’‘I wonder why they View changes from previous version. (Word count: 21021)
	Mar 15 2009, 5:42 PM EDT	IrishHitman		edit	1062 words added
Change: The system to raise it and block our entrance to the underground section had been blown, thanks to us, and we set up a watch on it.From what we could see, a series of tunnels lay at the bottom of it.I sat down against the far wall.Freya View changes from previous version. (Word count: 21021)

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