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Change: Chapter 2-A: Janet Morgan's Intro:My name is Janet Morgan. I am a survivor of the Second Pandemic. I and my fellow survivors have decided to record the gruesome events that followed the introduction of the pathogen into the system of the Thirteenth Casualty. I'm a high
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Change: winked. "People...I'm...really good cook." Anna Lee's Intro My name is Anna Lee. I am a survivor of the Second Pandemic. I and my fellow survivors decided to record the gruesome events that followed the introduction of the pathogen into the system of the Thirteenth Casualty. UNDER CONSTRUCTION
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Change: you probably forgot how to talk. That's normal. Even if you're immune, the Atlas Strain still messes with yourStrain...messes head."with...head." As he opened the door to leave the room, he said over his shoulder, "Janet, you can take offyou...off the mask now. Dave, try notmask...now. to
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Change: your head." As he opened the door to leave the room, he said over his shoulder, "Janet, you can take off the mask now. Dave, try not to collapse. I'll be back to make dinner." He smiled and winked. "People say I'm a really good cook." UNDER CONSTRUCTION
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Change: moment I forgot how to talk. WhenThe boss was watching me like I was some kind of zoo animal, then he finally spoke up. "Right now, you probably forgot how to talk. That's normal. Even if you're immune, the Atlas Strain still messes with your head." UNDER CONSTRUCTION
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Change: first one to talk and Janet was golf.the Verysecond. weird,I yes.think.Then I got a good smack to the head that pretty much finished the job that slap started. I got up quickly andbut forgotfor howa tomoment talkI forgot forhow
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Change: NSA!FBI! Open up or we'll break down the door!" a muffled voice came from behind the door. Of course, no one answered. The warehouse has been abandoned for years. Not even the homeless guy with the Irish accent lives there anymore. "We're coming in!" There was a
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Change: "Those weak...systems...turn fast...thirty seconds." "...whole world...Zack?" "...carriers...can't miss them." I suddenly thought about golf. Very weird, yes. Then I got a good smack to the head that pretty much finished the job that slap started. I got up quickly and forgot how to talk for a moment. When UNDER CONSTRUCTION
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Change: I woke up lying down on a matress being patted down by a sixteen year old girl. This was a dream come true, but I
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Change: Five to seven minutes into the "dream," I heard the rumble of an engine. I thought it was Ford coming back, but what came around
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Change: FInally realizing what was going on, many of the paratroopers started panicking. Most of the shots were aimed at center mass so they really didn't
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Change: The we noticed huge circular shadows everywhere. Oh, yeah, I've seen enough movies to know what they are. Paratroopers. Finally, help from the military! Now we have professional bullets to help us kill these sons of bitches. We finallygot out stoppedof atthe car and
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Change: my car, started the engine, then backed up into me. Clutching my knee, I got into the back, shutting the door behind me. I saw them again, the people who were eating other people that I saw while driving to work. Many were pale. Even more were bloody. I
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Change: I took my baton, personal shotgun and S&W .500 from the back of my SUV. Something in his voice made me really nervous. He has a knack of doing that, conjuring up emotions in men's hearts. Nervously, I questioned, "Umm, sir? You alright?" "Shut fuck up, Marquez!"
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Change: As I said, I didn't know any better, so I just ran over most of people I saw. There became more and more the nearer
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Change: damn sure act like it," I almost spat at him. "Well, I didn't know whether or not you're infected. Since you just talked, and you passed my screening test, you're not." "You're not a rapist, are you?" That caught him off guard. He had
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Change: monologue-ing. I was barely listening. My head hurt. "If you want to come, take a primary weapon, a secondary, a sidearm, and a melee weapon.
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