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Change: asked “Where do I stay?” Jake and Kenny stared at each other before Kenny broke into a grin and said “Here, I’ll show you.” you.”
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Jul 11 2008, 2:14 AM EDT
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Change: “I’m freezing” Kenny said, hugging his body standing on the hunters roost, “why didn’t we set up shop in someplace warm like Florida or Tahiti”
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Jul 10 2008, 1:36 AM EDT
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Change: LaterGone Sunday, September 7th, 2008 CE (2 Months AO) A series of groans, death rattles, and roars reached Jake’s ears, in a panicked voice he yelled “Hurry!” Jake screamed
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Jul 10 2008, 1:03 AM EDT
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Jul 10 2008, 12:55 AM EDT
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Jul 10 2008, 12:53 AM EDT
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Change: A series of groans, death rattles, and roars reached Jake’s ears, in a panicked voice he yelled “Hurry!” Jake screamed to Kenny Lee a skinny
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Change: this is a rough draft and so please bear with me if it seems a little too drawn out I'll fix things as I notice them. - Anti-Hero Post-Mortem Death … it’s Just a FormalityChapter One July 7th, 2008With a loud screech, Jake
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Jul 8 2008, 7:01 PM EDT
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Jul 8 2008, 5:17 AM EDT
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Change: remained their friend after dropping out, and now he was rooming with them to gohelp throughpay collegethe rent while they went to together.college. He stumbled to the sink and dry heaved, there was nothing
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Jul 8 2008, 12:15 AM EDT
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Change: - Anti-Hero Post-Mortem Death … it’s Just a Formality Chapter One July 7th, 2008 With a loud screech, Jake Burton’s door was pushed open by his two roommates, John Grey and Matt
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Jul 8 2008, 12:14 AM EDT
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Jul 8 2008, 12:11 AM EDT
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Change: it was all that went through his mind, John had Jake pinned to the wall, holding him by the shoulders now, two feet off the
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Change: Created by Jul 8 2008, 12:04 AM EDT for: no reason given
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