Change: woman, both of them in their early twenties. The man has a torque wrench and a lock pick in his hand, a big grin is on his face. “Who the Hell are you?” Robert asks in his deep booming voice pointing a Revolver at the two “Well my   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 3433)

Change: before they de-"were eat-" The radio begins to crackle cutting Gabriel off and a new man is on the air speaking with that “Yah Mahn” accent so   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 3426)

Change: Gabriel’sHis muscles tense, ready to run at the slightest provocation, in the twilight of the early morning a manhole cover is lifted. Out from the hole pops a human head, a woman with fiery red hair.   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 3347)

Change: inventory. His head hurts and his back feels like it at the very least has been bruised. His right shoulder throbs in pain, reaching back, an inch long sliver of glass is pulled free of his flesh. Rolling out from underneath the car, Gabrielhe rises to   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 3348)

Change: must have moved on. “Hello there” a rough voice says from behind They all turn, standing behind them is a man and a woman. The man has a torque wrench and a lock pick in his hand a big grin is on his face. “Who the Hell   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 3202)

Change: chorus of moans moansthat,that, thinking back, have been there all along. His hairs stand up on end, a feeling that Gabriel recognizes, something is definitely wrong.   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 1402)

Change: Rolling out from underneath the car, Gabriel rises to his feet and surveys the extent of th damage. Cars have been overturned, some are on   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 1400)

Change: Moans follow Allie McDowell as she runs through Alleys and down Roads, Moans constantly follow her as she races through Chicago. Most of those things   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 908)

Change: There were only format changes (bold, italics, etc.) in this version. See this version for details. (Word count: 308)

Change: Gabriel pulls on a pair of faded blue jeans and a simpl grey long sleeve t-shirt before dragging on his shoes without socks. Hejumps as   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 308)