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DAY 1

The fine line is the line between becomming one of them or staying human. This is my story. My name is Chris Willams and it was a normal saturday when the outbreak occured, i was foolishly unprepared and thought that this could never reach me, I was so deadly wrong. As i awoke going down stairs i got ready for work putting on a suit and eating my breakfast with haste because i was late already i raced to my car and started for the office. On the way there, it seemed so unnatrual that cars were everywhere leaving trying to leave the city and ambulances were slamed into sidewalk unmaned. As i reached the office around 10 to 15 people were running tword me with some attackers hot on their trail, i wanted nothing to do with it so i quickly opened the automatic gates and drove into the facility. The Office was a three story building with an elevator and stairs, fully stocked frigs, kitchens, tall gates, a neccisary key card to gain access, bathrooms and large office spaces. As i walked in the office i tried to use the key card on the elevator but it didn't work so i opened the stair way entrence and walked up. As i entered my level was no one there, which i thought was peticularly odd. As a made my way to my office one of my co-workers Fred jumped me and scared the shit out of me. He began screamming "HAVE YOU BEEN BITTEN" i looked at him in amazment as i was one the floor sure that i was going to die. I ansered a silent "no". He then droped the crowbar and sluped infront of me and i asked him, "What happened". He replyed " My family all died" he sarted sobing as i picked him up and went into the kitchen. He told me about what had happen to his family and also what was going on, i was staring at him with amazment because of the horrer that would confront us. We said to each other that we would make a teem and face any dangers comming tword us. Thus our troubles began, understanding that he had already taken out the elevator, we searched together down the hall way for the emergancy axe and the tool kit that should be next to it. Reaching the equipment we grabed what we could and quickly went back to an office. Fred said "Wwe should make this our headquarters because this room has one window to the balcony, is near the exit, and can be barracaded easily." I agreed and we went and took out the first and secound stair ways and pushed the rubble against the door to block the entrence. Next we got a ladder and took out the emergancy stair way, we took a peek outside and saw bodies everywhere outside of the office. I wispered, "hey you know those off road Ford F150s the designers use," he noded "lets drive them near here and use them for a quick escape. as we walked tword the vehicles i notice something walked up on us, i spun around and the zombie ran and tried to push one of us over, we quickly side stepped and i hit the axe on his head as Fred took a good home run hit on his back. I looked down and gasped, it was our boss that we all hated, i started to laugh silently and Fred joined in. We found a pistol and a couple extra clips, Fred checked them and they were .45cal rounds. Back to work we went, we took both vehicles and parked them beside the door making a barrier, looking outside, i quickly nudged Fred and he looked too, it seemed we allerted a couple hundred zombies too the main gate, shit. Back up the ladder we went and kepted on getting supplies from every level and realized we didn't have enough water so we turned on our foccets and showers to fill some buckets we found. Stoping for a break, we took some sandwiches and ate, "hey Chris," "yeah," "how long do you think the generators will last?" "duno, but there is defenetly still power in the city right now because generators aren't in use," "true," as he said that the power cut and there was a moment of scilenct before the generators started and the gentle hum began. I thought "shit" i asked Fred " do you know how to use a gun because i don't," Fred replied " yeah i do but i could teach you too" so for the next half hour he explained how to clean, aim, and fire the gun. After fnnishing we ran and picked up our buckets of water, and filled other buckets and met back at the headquarters, it was dusk by then. "chris," "yeah" "do you think we will make it through the night?" "maby" "should me make sleeping shifts?" "sounds good ill go first and get some more supplies" "okay um here you'll need this" he handed me the berreta "thanks remeber lock the doors and ill nock so you can open the door got it?" "yeah." I got up wondering "should i get more food stuffs or get some equipment" i decided that we had enough and went to the equipment room. While passing the security room, i decided to look at the screen for a bit, and i gasped because there was a zombie on my level by our headquarters. I sprinted as fast as i could and reached the headquarters and saw Saly one of our co-workers just zombified, i quickly used my axe and swung at her head, but missed and hit the neck, i tried to pull it out with no avail and took out the crowbar and smashed it into her shoulder and then tried again as i was backing up because of her aproches tword me, i thought "NO NO NO NO I AM NOT DIEING TODAY!" quickly i droped the crowbar and ran, the zombie ran after me and nocked me on the ground i quickly took the gun and shoved it on the bottom of the head and shot, i winced and looked up seeing that she was silent. i look in disbelief for a while and Fred came out and said "WHAT HAPPENED" i replied "god damit you sleep like a bear." he helped me take the body and throw it out of the building after saying a prayer. We decided it was too risky to take shifts anymore and we went into the room and baracaded the window and going to sleep after making sure the headquarters were secure.

DAY 2

Waking up i groaned and shook Fred saying "mornin" he grunted into the kitchen we went, taking some eggs we scrambled them and discussed our plans. "Fred we should first see how the zombie got there and then do recon on our floor then get some supplies" "Chris i have to disagree we need more equipment and supplies so we can get the hell out of here" "Yeah but we have all need here for a while