The Fine Line

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	Aug 7 2008, 4:48 PM EDT	Marsden	To-do done	edit	5 words added 4 words deleted
Change: - Part 2The main gate collapsed and we needed to leave, NOW!. we quickly went up stairs quietly and took everything from the headquarters, and put View changes from previous version. (Word count: 10082)
	Jul 28 2008, 2:15 PM EDT	comonsense		edit	16 words added
Change: drove to the trucks I explained to the rest of the team, Chapter 2 Times of Peace?it will be made on a new page (to be continued) please edit or make suggestions if you find any View changes from previous version. (Word count: 10082)
	Jul 23 2008, 9:07 PM EDT	comonsense		edit	8 words added 4 words deleted
Change: shit.Dayshit.Day 2 Part 2The main gate collapsed and we needed to leave, NOW!. we quickly went up stairs quietly and took everything from the headquarters, View changes from previous version. (Word count: 10066)
	Jul 23 2008, 8:39 PM EDT	comonsense		edit	1693 words added 280 words deleted
Change: As I awoke I saw that we had stopped in the highway in the triangular formation again. I got up and rubbed my eyes then View changes from previous version. (Word count: 10066)
	Jul 22 2008, 2:51 PM EDT	comonsense		edit	598 words added
Change: Getting in the golf cart i saw what he had modified the body so it was sleeker and had more protection from the undead. The View changes from previous version. (Word count: 8633)
	Jul 22 2008, 2:48 PM EDT	Marsden	Added capitals to words	rename	No content added or deleted.
Change: Renamed from The fine line by Marsden Jul 22 2008, 2:48 PM EDT for: Added capitals to words
	Jul 21 2008, 3:52 PM EDT	Marsden	Spelling	edit	321 words added 299 words deleted
Change: off road contsruction contsructionsitesite with a flat bed cover. After the trucks were full of our equipment the zombies were still wandering through the parking struckture.structure. We used one of the circular saws to cut a opening in the top of each truck and weildedwielded a View changes from previous version. (Word count: 8032)
	Jul 20 2008, 5:48 PM EDT	comonsense	story	edit	111 words added
Change: Ann replied,"ill sleep on the roof" and Jim just grunted and went back inside." I asked Fred and Sam what they wanted to do, They View changes from previous version. (Word count: 7999)
	Jul 20 2008, 5:41 PM EDT	comonsense	story	edit	794 words added
Change: I fell asleep, I was dreamming about when i was small and all the great times I had. Half asleep i felt someone slap me, View changes from previous version. (Word count: 7887)
	Jul 20 2008, 5:01 PM EDT	comonsense	story	edit	335 words added
Change: Then i spotted it, like an angle from heven it looked beutiful i told the others to cover me, I dashed at the battery and View changes from previous version. (Word count: 7090)
	Jul 20 2008, 4:35 PM EDT	comonsense	story	edit	473 words added 2 words deleted
Change: Getting up i saw Chuck cooking on a camp stove and he looked at me, he slid a plate of toast at me and i View changes from previous version. (Word count: 6752)
	Jul 20 2008, 3:41 PM EDT	comonsense	Moved from: Outbreak	move	No content added or deleted.
Change: Moved by comonsense Jul 20 2008, 3:41 PM EDT
	Jul 19 2008, 5:54 PM EDT	comonsense	story	edit	699 words added 1 word deleted
Change: next was the gas sation, i we got there, filled the golf cart up and filled as many gallons of gas we could into a View changes from previous version. (Word count: 6279)
	Jul 19 2008, 5:11 PM EDT	comonsense	story	edit	776 words added 1 word deleted
Change: supplies? or try and make it to the next town?" Fred replied, "we don't know what faces us next, i think we should get what View changes from previous version. (Word count: 5574)
	Jul 19 2008, 4:41 PM EDT	comonsense	story	edit	1168 words added
Change: We took our gear and put it in the trucks while we loaded our guns and got in. As i looked around there were zombies View changes from previous version. (Word count: 4781)
	Jul 18 2008, 4:36 PM EDT	comonsense		edit	814 words added 3 words deleted
Change: a M1 carbine, 10 etra clips, tactical vest, and a bayonet. We looked at each other and noded we were ready. We ran down the View changes from previous version. (Word count: 3583)
	Jul 18 2008, 3:44 PM EDT	comonsense	story	edit	738 words added 3 words deleted
Change: cover. After the trucks were full of our equipment the zombies were still wandering through the parking struckture. We used one of the circular saws View changes from previous version. (Word count: 2764)
	Jul 18 2008, 2:09 PM EDT	comonsense		edit	34 words added
Change: the F-150s, shit.Day 2 Part 2 The main gate collasped and we needed to leave, NOW!. we quickly went up stairs quietly and took everything from the headquarters, and put it in the truck. The trucks themselves were make for offroad contsructionsite and a flat bed cover View changes from previous version. (Word count: 2006)
	Jul 18 2008, 1:59 PM EDT	comonsense	story	edit	756 words added
Change: how about we stay untill its overrun or runs out of supplies, after all we are in the shopping district of the town," "okay i View changes from previous version. (Word count: 1972)
	Jul 18 2008, 1:24 PM EDT	comonsense	story	edit	1207 words added
Change: The fine line is the line between becomming one of them or staying human. This is my story. My name is Chris Willams and it View changes from previous version. (Word count: 1211)

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