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The Horde
Don is 32 in the Australian army, white, with short brown hair, and pretty strong.
Cole is a 36 year old Helicopter pilot in the army, black, basically bold, and VERY BUFF!
Ryan is 33 in the Aussie army, born in America, white, with middle-ish, light brown hair...
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Chapter 1: three man Army
The Horde was massive, bigger than the last. The viscous virus had not reached the cities yet, but sure have reached the Australian army. They were not even Dead, they were infected by a disease that started to change there thoughts. It made people go crazy, resorting into cannibalism. They were getting smarter, Don & Ryan jumped behind there car loading there guns as fast as they could, 'Holy ****, there bloody fast!' Don yelled as he turned over his AK-47 and began shooting through the gap under the car. 'you got the keys?' Ryan shouted, 'No, i left them with Cole in the helicopter', 'You kidding me?' Don yelled. The infected were only meters away with not many shots left. Don got up into the car, while the infected began smashing at the side of it. Ryan jumped up and backed into the shed based next to the helicopters. The car was like a barricade, it sat between two giant sheds not letting anything past, unless you went around the whole Perimeter. Don, pulled the part underneath the glove department and pulled out two wires. He Zapped them together, hot wiring the car. Ryan opened the security lock to the shed, and without realizing hundreds of guns fell on top of him. 'Oi Don, Guns here'. Ryan looked around and noticed that Don got the car started. It pulled away, attracting the infected with the noise. Ryan, grab as many guns and ammo's as possible. Then headed to the the helicopters where Cole was setting up. Is was dark, but the lights flashed everywhere from the buildings, everyone was gone, dead, or one of them. Don stopped, then reversed, crushing heaps of them. The back of the car was covered in blood. Don couldn't even see, He pulled around facing them head on and rammed straight into the crowd. The car stopped. Right in the middle. They began smashing the windows and even tried getting in. Don looked at the back seat as the things started breaking in, '****!', It was a sheet he pulled it off and three pistols laid there. he lifted them and opened the sun roof. Then jumped into the raging crowed of infected. They all began pulling him down. he lifted up his arms and began to shoot them off. But one grabbed his leg and started to drag him out the crowed. The it stopped and all of them looked at Don, then fell to the ground. In the distance Cole and Ryan Held a Browning M2, each. Don was scratched and was bleeding rapidly, Cole and Ryan dragged him to the helicopter field and onto the Colicopter (Cole's helicopter). More began to appear out of the bushes. Don was dozing off into a dream, The helicopter began to start, but it wasn't fast enough. The infected Ran up and began banging on the sides of the helicopter. some were climbing on but were sliced off by the helicopter propellers. '**** OFF!!!!, YOU ANNOYING BLOODY *****' Cole yelled. Ryan grabbed a chainsaw that was lying on the ground of the seats, with the rest of the guns. He opened the door as they began to fly off. he turned on the chainsaw and using one hand he sliced there legs off making them fall off the side. one pounce down on Ryan from the roof of the helicopter and pinned him down tightly. The thing released one hand and pushed it on his face. Ryan grabbed onto a shot gun and pushed it against the things neck making it release its hands giving Ryan a second to shoot it. he pointed straight up and squeezed the trigger. Blasting a huge whole through its head and puddles of blood stated to form. '****!'. 'Hey Ryan, you alright back there?' Cole shouted, 'So now you bloody ask. Thanks so ****** much'. 'Set out to the city, get everyone out.' Ryan smirk.
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Cole is a 36 year old Helicopter pilot in the army, black, basically bold, and VERY BUFF!
Ryan is 33 in the Aussie army, born in America, white, with middle-ish, light brown hair...
.......................................................................................................................................................
Chapter 1: three man Army
The Horde was massive, bigger than the last. The viscous virus had not reached the cities yet, but sure have reached the Australian army. They were not even Dead, they were infected by a disease that started to change there thoughts. It made people go crazy, resorting into cannibalism. They were getting smarter, Don & Ryan jumped behind there car loading there guns as fast as they could, 'Holy ****, there bloody fast!' Don yelled as he turned over his AK-47 and began shooting through the gap under the car. 'you got the keys?' Ryan shouted, 'No, i left them with Cole in the helicopter', 'You kidding me?' Don yelled. The infected were only meters away with not many shots left. Don got up into the car, while the infected began smashing at the side of it. Ryan jumped up and backed into the shed based next to the helicopters. The car was like a barricade, it sat between two giant sheds not letting anything past, unless you went around the whole Perimeter. Don, pulled the part underneath the glove department and pulled out two wires. He Zapped them together, hot wiring the car. Ryan opened the security lock to the shed, and without realizing hundreds of guns fell on top of him. 'Oi Don, Guns here'. Ryan looked around and noticed that Don got the car started. It pulled away, attracting the infected with the noise. Ryan, grab as many guns and ammo's as possible. Then headed to the the helicopters where Cole was setting up. Is was dark, but the lights flashed everywhere from the buildings, everyone was gone, dead, or one of them. Don stopped, then reversed, crushing heaps of them. The back of the car was covered in blood. Don couldn't even see, He pulled around facing them head on and rammed straight into the crowd. The car stopped. Right in the middle. They began smashing the windows and even tried getting in. Don looked at the back seat as the things started breaking in, '****!', It was a sheet he pulled it off and three pistols laid there. he lifted them and opened the sun roof. Then jumped into the raging crowed of infected. They all began pulling him down. he lifted up his arms and began to shoot them off. But one grabbed his leg and started to drag him out the crowed. The it stopped and all of them looked at Don, then fell to the ground. In the distance Cole and Ryan Held a Browning M2, each. Don was scratched and was bleeding rapidly, Cole and Ryan dragged him to the helicopter field and onto the Colicopter (Cole's helicopter). More began to appear out of the bushes. Don was dozing off into a dream, The helicopter began to start, but it wasn't fast enough. The infected Ran up and began banging on the sides of the helicopter. some were climbing on but were sliced off by the helicopter propellers. '**** OFF!!!!, YOU ANNOYING BLOODY *****' Cole yelled. Ryan grabbed a chainsaw that was lying on the ground of the seats, with the rest of the guns. He opened the door as they began to fly off. he turned on the chainsaw and using one hand he sliced there legs off making them fall off the side. one pounce down on Ryan from the roof of the helicopter and pinned him down tightly. The thing released one hand and pushed it on his face. Ryan grabbed onto a shot gun and pushed it against the things neck making it release its hands giving Ryan a second to shoot it. he pointed straight up and squeezed the trigger. Blasting a huge whole through its head and puddles of blood stated to form. '****!'. 'Hey Ryan, you alright back there?' Cole shouted, 'So now you bloody ask. Thanks so ****** much'. 'Set out to the city, get everyone out.' Ryan smirk.
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| Markthegenius | Dude, seriously | 1 | Mar 31 2011, 7:31 PM EDT by oldannyboy37 | ||
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Thread started: Mar 31 2011, 7:27 PM EDT
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Break it up into paragraphs, won't you? I never read any amateur zombie fiction, its just not my thing, but seriously, if you want people to read it, break it up.
btw, how old are you? EDIT: I just started to read through it and its choc-full of spelling errors as well. The one that stood out most though was "there" instead of "their" |
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| ebit4life | Great | 0 | Mar 31 2011, 5:02 PM EDT by ebit4life | ||
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Nice, great story mate (Aussie Accent) lol its great.
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| Maricely | Nice story | 0 | Jan 24 2010, 6:08 AM EST by Maricely | ||
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Thread started: Jan 24 2010, 6:08 AM EST
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Friendly criticism: Their, there, and they're! If you're interested I can help you edit.
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