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This will be my second short story ('The Recruit' was the first. Go read it. Like, now!) and my third fiction (My first is Outbreak, Recovery, Cover Up. It's not done yet, but if you make a thread that says 'Write More, Write Faster!' on that, or any other of my fictions, and get enough posts, I will definitely be motivated to write more.). Uh, well, this is about two lovers...I guess. Don't worry, this won't be one of those cheesy chic flicks. I know, I hate those too. As with any other of my fictions, reader discretion is advised, and please enjoy! Oh, and by the way, I forgot to mention that "this artifact was dug up from an archeological site in France" (read the summary in the 'Zombie Fiction' page) so I was planning on writing in French, but since I really don't know French, I'll go ahead and "translate" it for you. Enjoy!
PS. I'd take (CONSTRUCTIVE) complaints, critiques, and criticisms over compliments ANY day to help me improve my writing. Of course, compliments are also welcome and I will be grateful for them. Again, enjoy! HERE WE GOOOOOO!!!
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"Anne-Marie Jacqueline, for crying out loud, listen to me."
"No Marc! You listen to me! Every time you drank too much on your shift, who was there to pick up the pieces? Every time you forgot your bags at home, who had to drive three kilometers back to get them? I'm tired of it! I need a break, Marc. I needed a break a long time ago."
There was another awkward pause as both went through the door of their apartment. Marc, a man of 25
Marc buried his face in his hands and said, "Oh, god, this is all my fault."
"Thank you, Marc. You have no idea how much of a relief that is to me."
This will be my second short story ('The Recruit' was the first. Go read it. Like, now!) and my third fiction (My first is Outbreak, Recovery, Cover Up. It's not done yet, but if you make a thread that says 'Write More, Write Faster!' on that, or any other of my fictions, and get enough posts, I will definitely be motivated to write more.). Uh, well, this is about two lovers...I guess. Don't worry, this won't be one of those cheesy chic flicks. I know, I hate those too. As with any other of my fictions, reader discretion is advised, and please enjoy! Oh, and by the way, I forgot to mention that "this artifact was dug up from an archeological site in France" (read the summary in the 'Zombie Fiction' page) so I was planning on writing in French, but since I really don't know French, I'll go ahead and "translate" it for you. Enjoy!
PS. I'd take (CONSTRUCTIVE) complaints, critiques, and criticisms over compliments ANY day to help me improve my writing. Of course, compliments are also welcome and I will be grateful for them. Again, enjoy! HERE WE GOOOOOO!!!
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"Anne-Marie Jacqueline, for crying out loud, listen to me."
"No Marc! You listen to me! Every time you drank too much on your shift, who was there to pick up the pieces? Every time you forgot your bags at home, who had to drive three kilometers back to get them? I'm tired of it! I need a break, Marc. I needed a break a long time ago."
There was another awkward pause as both went through the door of their apartment. Marc, a man of 25
Marc buried his face in his hands and said, "Oh, god, this is all my fault."
"Thank you, Marc. You have no idea how much of a relief that is to me."
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