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| Drewblet | Sorry. . . | 19 | Nov 26 2010, 4:19 PM EST by AlexHigginbotham | ||||
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Thread started: Apr 20 2008, 6:45 AM EDT
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Hate to be a jackass, but in my opinion, the writing isn't quite up to "novel" level, per se. To be honest, I think that the editors would have puppies if they saw it on their plate. Otherwise, though, it's sounding good. Keep up the writing, but be ruthless with yourself during editing. And where's the Prologue, for which there's a title but no body? Again, though, good start!
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| andwii | sorry... | 0 | Sep 3 2009, 12:56 AM EDT by andwii | ||||
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don't worry
I am ruthless with my editing I have already re-written it 5 times so bare in mind.. of course the first time my cat peed on my work so... |
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| Dmurl5 | Pretty good, but. | 0 | May 15 2008, 10:25 AM EDT by Dmurl5 | ||||
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You gotta use some pronouns. Besides that, it's awesome. Keep it up!
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