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| Dmurl5 | Pretty good, but. | 0 | May 15 2008, 10:25 AM EDT by Dmurl5 | |
| Drewblet | Sorry. . . | 0 | Apr 20 2008, 6:45 AM EDT by Drewblet | |
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| Dmurl5 | Pretty good, but. | 0 | May 15 2008, 10:25 AM EDT by Dmurl5 | |
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You gotta use some pronouns. Besides that, it's awesome. Keep it up!
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| Drewblet | Sorry. . . | 0 | Apr 20 2008, 6:45 AM EDT by Drewblet | |
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Hate to be a jackass, but, I have to say, the writing isn't quite "novel" level. The editors would have puppies if they saw it. Otherwise, however, it's sounding good. Keep up the writing, but be ruthless with yourself during edditing. And where's the Prologue? I'm also concidering getting my story (I Read) published, when it's finished. Again, though, good start!
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