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No one knew as they woke up that day that this particular day would practically be their last. No one knew that this day would almost end the human race. Almost. But not quite. There were only three survivors that I knew of at that time. There were probably more than that who were able to get away, but I only knew of the three then. Those people where Mat, Jared and I. It was mat who truly saved us. We herd it in the middle of our third period art class. The announcement that frantically said- or shouted is more accurate- "All teachers, must lock your doors immediately! Again, all teachers MUST lock there doors immediately! For certain reasons it is important that teachers do this. So teachers, lock your doors-" But then the intercom flickered and then went silent. I was frozen over the drawing I was working on. I forgot what it was. I forced my eyes to look up at Jared sitting across from me. His horror struck eyes were fixed on the intercom. I looked over
to mat sitting to my right. He had a look on his face that looked.... Concentrated? Or was it a look of worry? It almost looked like he knew something. Then out of the corner of my eye I saw Mr. Baily jump up from his desk and lock the classroom door. "Okay," he said. "I don't want anyone to panic. So just stay calm, and stay in your seats."
"Oh my god." mat said under his breath. I turned toward him.
"What?" I asked him. I was totally confused. But he looked as if he knew exactly what was going on. But he was not listening to me. He was staring down at the black table top that had been repeatedly painted, scratched, and marked on.
"It finally started," he whispered. Then his brown eyes came up to look at mine. His expression turned to one of worry as soon as his gaze came to rest upon me.
"What started? Mat tell me." I said with a little volume. Jared then took his eyes off of the silent intercom and looked at us.
"We have to get away from here." he spoke, this time to me.
"What?" this time it was not me who had asked that question. No, the words had belonged to Jaryd. But I did not turn to look at him. I was too confused by mats expression to look away from it.
"Come on, we have to get out now. Right now!" and with that, he grabbed my arm and started dragging me to the door.
"Hey," Mr. Baily shouted at us. "Where are you going? I said to stay in your seats!"
"Do you know what's going on out there?" mat shot back at him. It sounded like a rhetorical question. "Pretty soon, they will start to actually come out, and when they do, you people will probably be stupid enough to still be here in these little tin can portables of yours, and because you weren't smart enough to move when you had the chance, they will catch you. And you will die." What he was saying made no sense at all to me. But before I could think of anything else, he started to tug me out the door.
"Wait!" I shouted. I tried to pull free but he wasn't having that.
"Lacie, we have to move! Were running out of time!"
"Just wait a minute!" I said frantically, and managed to struggle out of his grasp. Mr. Baily looked at me like he was thinking I actually had some sense, but I just rushed right past him. Jared, still sitting in the seat across from the one I used to be sitting in, gazed at me with a.... I guess you could call it a shocked expression. It looked so confused, and afraid and just so totally shocked that it was hard to put words to.
"Come on!" I said to him as I grabbed his wrist and pulled him with me out the door.
"Hey, what are you doing?" he said to me as I continued to lead him.
"I know I can trust mat," I said to him reassuringly."And if he says that we need to go right now, then I'll do that. Just know that I'm going to be bringing you with me." I turned to smile at him. It was a smile full of fear, and confusion, but it was still a smile. He turned up one corner of his mouth in a sort of half smile, but it kind of reminded me of the one I had just worn on my face. Full of confusion and worry.
"We have to hurry, we don't have much time left until they start to show themselves." mats face was wiped clean of any emotion at all. Which was odd for him, because he was one of those people who always have an easily identifiable emotion plastered on their face. He started to walk faster, staring straight ahead. I let go of Jared's wrist so that he could walk easier. I was kind of relieved when he didn't run away.
"Max, tell me where we are going!" I said to him as I hurried to keep up with his pace. Jared did the same.
"Finding a car. Would anyone happen to know how to hot wire one?"
Jared hesitated, but then in a totally confused voice, said," Um... I do." if I weren't so afraid, I would have rolled my eyes. I can't believe he knew how to hot wire a car. That was SO Jared. But why did we need a car anyway? None of us were even old enough to drive. But before I could ask, he suddenly stopped abruptly in front of a white Honda.
"We can take this one." he said mostly to himself, and smashed out the back passenger window with his elbow. I jumped back as the glass hit the asfault where I had just been standing. "Sorry." he mumbled. Jared steped back with me and took my hand. It comforted me, but not very much.
"Jared?" max called over his shoulder.
"What?" jared responded in a startled way, wile at the same time letting go of my hand. It smacked against my thigh numbly.
"I need you to hot wire the car so we can actualy drive it." his voise was a monotone. No emotion.
"Um, okay." he said, sounding unsure. He opened the door on the drivers side and climbed half way into the car. He took out all the matts, and even the floor pannel. Under it, there were lots of wires, and he fidled around with them- cutting one, then ataching another to a diffident one- untill it seemed as though he had done his job.
"Get in." max ordered. Jared and I got into the back seat wile max tryed his hand at driving. He threw the car into reverce, and backed out of the parking spot. I had to admit, he made a pritty good driver for a 12 year old. Jared took my hand again. It didn't really make me feel better, but it was nice. But think about it, would you feel comfortable if you were in a car with a 7th grader driving you to god knows where and won't tell you what's going on?
"Okay max," I said, breaking the silence. "I've done what you have asked, now tell me what's going on."
I turned around to look at laci's horified face, i had no time to show my emotions.
"they are coming, and they will kill everything in their path" laci looked at me.
"who are coming?"
I made a sharp turn causing jared and laci to shake around in the back.
"theres no time to explain"
she looked blank at me, she had an anoyed and affraid look on her face. i pulled the car into the parking lot of a gun store, got out an ran towards the entrance but before i could i heard laci yell
"wait let me help" jared let go of milacis hand and she walked inside the store with me, no one was there.
"grabas much guns and ammo as you can" i said to her, she nooded. we bolth ran to the the car guns pilled upon us. jared had a look of surprise but also excitment.
"jared, pop the trunk will ya"
"sure" he yelled.
"laci put all the guns in the trunk with the ammo ok" she did so.
i came out holding a radio, put it in the trunk and got into the car. i turned around and made everyone was there then i drove off.
"max where are we going?" laci said to me in a paniced tone.
"someplace safe, your house. i will explain the rest when we get there. the ture horror of it was driving though the streets that were completly abandoned. there was no sign of life any where. we pulled up to her drive way and parked the car.i poped the trunk and steped out. i opened laci's door. her and jared bolth steped out.
"we need to get these guns upstairs" i said, laci turned and grabed some guns, i did the same. we walked into her house. i handed my guns to jared and told bolth him and laci to bring them to the 3rd story top room, they left. i went up to the 3rd and 2nd storys and started filling up all the sinks and tubs with water cause soon there will be no more water services in operation. then i went down stairs and started pilling all the caned food in my arms and taking it upstairs to the top room as jared and laci watched, finally there was no more caned food left so i ran into lacis room.
"hey!" she yelled, i ignored her. i ran back into the top room with some pillows closed the door and locked it.
"now that we are locked in this room maybe you can start explaining something now!" laci yelled.
"well i think what is happening is the zombie apocylpse, this virus takes over a host, such as a dead body. it then takes over the brain causing it to reanimate. in that stadge it then goes looking for another host to give the virus to thats why it bites you, to spread the virus. the only way to kill it is by desroying the brain or seperating it from the body. the main goal for us is to stay alive and not get biten by one of the creatures. if we do we would have to be killed as to not spread the virus to the rest of us." laci and jared stared at me blankly.
"we need our sleep i got us some pillows, sleep tight" i tossed the pillows to them and i crawled over to a corner and fell asleep.
The zombie apocylips? Had max gone crazy? I looked at him cureled up in the far courner of my third story, asleep. His face looked serious even in sleep. It had to be about three in the morning, but I was still wide awake. And so was jared. "Do you think max went crazy?" I wispered over to jared, who was sitting close beside me. It was an honest question, and not the least bit sarcastic.
"I don't know." he said. "I think he might have, because the only place I have ever heard of a zombie apocylips is in those cheesy science fiction movies."
I knew I trusted max, I always had. But now, I wasn't so sure. I mean, come on. I was sitting in the third story of my house,( which when we got here had been empty as well) with at least twenty difirent types of guns and a ridiculous amount of amunition stacked against the far wall, the door was locked, and the person who got us into thing was saying it was because of the 'zombie apocylips'. And right now, I was almost totaly convinced that that person had gone crazy. But I couldn't get out, the door was locked! Jared, who I hadent noticed was staring at me broke the silence, by asking me, "what are you thinking so hard about?" both he and max knew almost all of my facial expressions by heart now. But they were always kind if easy to read. I didn't answer him. My mind was still on that locked door. Wait a minute... A briliant idea! I jumped up from where I had been sitting, and pulled jared along with me.
"Come on!" I wispered urgently. I went up to the locked door. Sence my house was built in something like 1906, all of the doors had those skeleton key lockes on them. Those ones that you needed a skeleton key to open. And it just so happoned that almost every day, I wore one around my neck. And i was whering it today. The reason I wore it was because I had given one to jared, which he always kept in the pocket of his jacket that he had left back in the art room. Not even pausing at the door, I un fastened the silver chaine that the key hung from and stuck the key in the lock. It took a few minutes to open it, cause keys of this century fit in the lock way better, but then I finaly had it open. Yes! I said to myself in my head. I looked back at max to make sure I hadn't woken him up, then at jaren who looked almost realeved to have a way out, and pulled him out the door with me. We tryed to be as quiet as possible wile half running down the stares but it was not an easy thing to do. My staires where creeky enough already. When we got to the first floor, I didn't think. I just knew we had to get out of here. I threw open the frount door when I reached it, and came out into the cool night. I could faintly see the sky starting to turn pink over the horizon. Jared and I ran out into the road (I wasn't worried about cars because it was just about deserted here anyway). But then... Where my eyes playing tricks on me? I thought I saw a person walking along the side walk. So we weren't alone! Jared aperantly saw them too, and shouted, "Hey!" the person stoped dead in there tracks for a moment, and then started to stumble slowely tward us. We had stoped in the road, and could still see my house clearly, but maybe this person could help us. The somebody was getting closer, and I could clearly see their features now, which made me do a double take. They where bone pail, with ragged clothing that had multiple ripps and tears. Their hair looked like it hadent been washed in years. But that wasn't the part that froze me with fear. Their expression was so emotionless it almost looked dead. And their eyes where so clouded over, it was hard to see their puple. It looked three times more real than any zombie I had ever seen on tv before. And there it was. Not five feet away from me. When jarryn noticed these features also, he jumped back a step. I would have done the same, but I couldn't move. I was too affraid. The zombie took his long boney fingers and grabed my wrist. He started leaning his head tward me. I skreemed.
i woke up to the sound of a scream, i noticed that laci and jared wherent in the room anymore and the door was open. i grabed a pistol and ran outside. i saw laci strugling with a zombie. i raised my gun, it was hard to aim cause my hands were trembling. i pulled the triger, the bullet exited the barrel and entered the zombies eye only to be acknowledged by the sound of the skull craking and the blood that stained bolth laci and jared's shirts.
"what the heck are you guys doing!" i yelled.
"you are going to get yourselves killed!" i lowered the gun, i took a glance at the zombies last movement. i looked at them.
"do you guys want to die! or is this just some huge joke to you!" laci looked at me. to tramatized to speak. jared stood there with an expression as if he did not belive what just happened. i turned around, looked back and said.
"come with me or stand out here and wait to die" then i turned and walked back towards the house and went inside.
I whached max turn around and go back inside. I tryed to move. I tryed to run back inside the house and go back up to the third floor where it was safe. Well, safer. But I couldn't. I looked down at the zombie, laying there on the street, there was blood every where. Even on jared and I. "laci, are you coming?" I herd him ask. His voice sounded far away, even though he was standing right next to me. I started to get dizy. My fishon started to fade out until every thing was black. I felt air rush past me, and then I hit the ground. It didn't hurt, but it felt kind of weird. I was starting to fade out, but before I did I herd jared gasp," oh my god." I herd footsteps.
"What happoned to her!?" max demanded.
"I don't know, I think she might have fainted." I couldn't tell what they where saying any more as I fell deeper into the blackness.
laci layed there on the ground. the zombies kept getting closer we had to move fast.
"jared we have to get laci inside before any more zombies try and kill us"
"max i don-"
"Just hurry up and we will pick her up come on" i ran over and put my arms under her legs, jared under her back, we lifted her back inside to the 1st story living room. i ran and closed the door before any zombies could get inside.
"jared take my pistol"
"wh-"
"just do it" he grabed it, i went over to laci and checked her for bites. there was none that i could see of. i turned and saw jared looking down the barrel.
"jared!" i yelled, followed by the sound of a gun discharge and ripping flesh. jared fell to his kness in agony. he had shoot himself in the shoulder luckily not his face or his neck or chest. now it was my turn turn to gasp not out of surprise but frustration. i ran to jared.
"dude you ok" i said, he grunted in pain. i layed him down next to laci. in my mind i thought everyone here was close to death mostly laci. i raised lacis feet and sat them on top of a pillow and layed a blanket over her just in case she was in shock. i dragged myself in a corner and odly found myself crying. jared was doing the same even though his was most likly out of pain not sadness. i soon relized i needed to do something about jareds wound. i ran upstairs grabbed rubbing alcholol, tweasers, and bandages. i ran back down stais and got a rag from the kitchen. i told him this may hurt. i took the tweasers and pulled out the bullet, then poured some alchol on the rag and dabed the wound then badaged it. i looked over at laci, to my relief she was still breahting. i sat down next to jared. tired i looked at him. his face still in pain. i looked at my hands they were covered in blood. i got up even though i new t was the last thing i wanted to do. i went to the kitchen sink and washed my hands of jareds blood, dried them off and then sat back down. i sat there thinking if this would ever end and i would ever have the life i wanted, if i would ever see my family and other friends again. what would happen if i lost any of the friends i have now. i was now sobbing at this point. i would never see my loved ones again. i would have no one to share the rest of my life with, i would never have my first kiss. the thoughts made me sob more. even the zombie have a better life than me. if only there was that person for me here so i could live it better. laci sort of shuffled in her spot, i stoped crying and looked over.
ilaci?" i said, she looked at me smiled then she whent limb and her eyes closed again. jared seemed to have calmed down. he looked at me.
"do you think laci will be ok" i looked at him and smiled.
"shell be fine just needs time to recover" he smilled and looked down at laci with a look that made my heart warm. i looked at him.
"if i ever die jared, take good care of her don't let anything ever happen to her, she is one of the best friends i have and one of urs. don't ever let her go" laci again shuffled in her spot, she looked up with jared with a wide smile, she turned to look at me. i smilled and whispered.
"welcome back"
At first when I woke up, a had no idea what I was doing here, how I got here, or what had even happoned. All I knew, was that I was with the two people who understood me more than anyone else probably would. And then it all came into focus. I opened my eyes to jared smiling at me in the sweetest way imaginable, and max also smiling at me with an expression that looked like he was saying, "thank god your okay."
"Welcome back." he said to me. I was about to say something to him, when I realized that jared had even more blood on his shirt, and a huge bandage on his shoulder.
"what happoned to you? are you okay!?" I felt worried. But when he blushed and looked down, I thought he probably did something really stupid to himself by accident.
"I told him to hold my gun wile we where getting you in here and he accidentaly shot himself." max replyied when jared wouldn't. He said it almost like it was no big deal.
"You have got to be more careful!" I told him sternly. He rolled his eyes at me.
"We are in the middle of the zombie apocylips and your telling me to be careful."
"Ya I am." at this we all started laughing. I looked at both of their faces. I needed them to be careful. They where all I had left. The laughing came to an abrupt stop when we herd the moaning from the zombies getting closer. "Okay, you were right about the zombie apocylips after all." I atmitted to max feeling really stupid.
His eyes turned angree. "Ya, why were you stupid enough to leave the house any way!? And leave it un armed?" he said. I guess I deserved this.
"Well, I hadn't seen any zombies, and the only place I have ever herd of a Zombie up riseing is in bad horror movies. I thought you had gone crazy or something, so I desided to leave."
He looked exasperated. "Just don't do it again okay? Just about gave me a freeking heart attack."
I glansed out the window at the street outside. It had zombies all over it. All coming this way. The really sick part was that I could actually name some of them. There was the post man coming tward our direction, I saw that lady who lived in the appartment house two doors down, a kid from the neiborhood who rode his bike up and down the street. But some of them- it was probably most of them- where walking to my house. A few where even banging on our windows.
"Um, max? Those things are trying to get into the house."
He looked outside. "that reminds me," he began. "I need to teach you two how to use a gun."
"what?" I asked shocked."me?"
"ya, you and mr. Einstine over there. You need to know how to defend your selves. But right now," he picked up a little hand gun and ofered it to me. " I'm just going to have to trust that your aim is okay."
I stared, horified at the pistol he was holding out to me. I looked up at him. When he saw that I wasn't going to take it, he plased it in my hand, and cureled my fingers around it. "Wait!" I said franticly. "can't you just have jared do it? I don't know how to use a gun!"
"well, I don't think that he is in the best shape right now." we both looked down at him. " besides laci," he continued."you have to learn to look out for yourself." I continued to stare at him. Totaly horified. "Alright," he said as he stood up. I was still lieing down with a blanket over me. He yanked the blanket off, and pulled me too my feet. I griped the gun the way I thought you were supposed to. I looked at jared still sitting down. He looked at me with worried eyes. "Come on." mat said as he towed me to the frount door. He put his hand on the knob.
"Mat," I said. "I dint know how to use this thing."
" it's not that hard, you've seen movies, just aim and pull the trigger."
"But mat-"
" we don't really have time to argue." with that, he pulled his own gun out of where ever he had been keeping it.
"Just try not to shoot me okay?" he said, and then threw open the door.

i looked at laci, put bolth of my hands on her shoulders
"do your best, remember aim for the head"
"but-"
"just try laci" i ran out gun in hand, i aimed for the head of a zombie i missed as another one of the zombies knocked me to the floor. there was a huge bang as the head of the zombie leaning over me exploded. i sat up and laci had a satisfied look on her face and was yelling.
"yes i got one, i got one, take that zombie!" i looked to the right of her
"laci look out!" a zombie was closing in on her, then i heard a yell
"get away from my girlfriend!!" i saw jared lift his pistol as he ran out of the building, he fired. the zombie next to laci fell to the ground with a thud. he ran to her and gave her a big hug. at this point i realized that i had a sharp pain in my ankle.
"laci, laci!!" she looked at me concerned.
"help" she ran over.
"are you okay mat?" she asked panicly.
"i think i sprained my ankle" i replied.
"come on" she said in a anoyed tone. she grabed my arm and put it arond her shoulders and helped me get up and walk back inside the house.
" that was not the best idea" i said. jared looked at me.
"no duh sherlock"
"shutup" i barked.
"guys stop fighting!" laci yelled as she looked at bolth us us and lead us back to the room on the 3rd story.


Well, it looked like I was now officialy the nurse. After all, if these two idiots keep this up, they were going to be in a fullbody cast soon. We where about a day into the zobie upriseing and already, Jared had shot himself in the shoulder, and mat had twisted his anckel. Oh ya, and i had fainted. So far, we weren't doing so hot. So yes, I was the one who put on the bandaids, and put my arm around them and said it's okay. But it was far from okay. Every night, as I sat up in the third story of my house, I herd the moaning from the zombies out side. And man, zombies never shut up. The only way I could sleep at all, was if I had someone next to me, and I always had reach out and hold their hand to make sure they were still there. Which was why it was almost always Jared, because he got really jelouse if it was mat. I eventualy learned how to use a gun, and so did jared. So we were able to fight off zombies more easly now. In the middle of the second week
of the zombie invation, I went down stairs to gather all the books from both my room, and the little den. I also rounded up some paper, and a few board games that I remembered we had in the dens closet. This made life a little bit more entertaining, because most of the time, we were all just sitting around my third story (it was the safest place). We talked a lot too. One day, as we were talking, we where all practicaly sitting on opisite sides of the room. Jared was sitting infrount of where the stairs led down to the second story. Mat had his back up against the window that looked over the street, and I was sitting in the far courner of the room near where we cept the guns (always loaded just in case). Jared had said something funny and I looked up at him and started to smile. But my expression froze in plase. Because standing over him, located right behind him on the stairs within easy bitting distance was an actual zombie.
"Jared!" I sceamed in absolute horror. He looked at me, starteled. But he had no idea that a blood thirsty zombie was standing right behind him. I reached over, took a loaded pistol, and fired. Thank god that mat had helped me with me aim, because if he hadent, I probably would have blown jareds brained out. But instead it flew past him, and colided with the zombies forhead. Jared turned around and saw the dead zombie lieing on the stairs, and turned his horrified gase back to me. "are you okay!?" I demanded as I ran up to him, and threw my arms around him.
"um... Ya I think so." he said as he hugged me back. I then turned to max. "How did that zombie get in here?" I asked him. His face wad no longer joking like it had been a few minutes ago. Now it was dead serious.
"They found a way in. We have to destroy the stair ways."
I looked at him, not really understanding what he was saying. "destroy the stairs?"



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MaxReidMcmeekin i dont give a ****!!!! 6 Mar 15 2010, 5:08 PM EDT by Drewblet
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i dont care what you have to say about my writting, yes there are mistakes but i was not the only one writting it, one other person was too thats why names are different!!!!!!!!! and i am good at the story not the mechanics of it so shut up you damn whinney pervs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Buggle Fail 0 Dec 20 2009, 4:22 PM EST by Buggle
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Why did you change mats name to max Whos Lacie? Good idea but you kinda killed it You spelt Jared like this but one time you spelt it Jaryd? You are very bad writer
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MaxReidMcmeekin hello 10 Dec 8 2009, 11:54 AM EST by Kam47
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hi this page is my novel and my friends novel. please do not edit it with out my permission, thx!
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