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Change: Unlimited four-door 4x4 off-road edition with bumper flood-lights, a front tow winch and off-road tires. I put the packs in the back seat and hoisted Jessica
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Change: since it started.Author's Note: I have the first part of the sequel posted, here's a link: Land of the Damned I also have another series posted, Here's a link: The Undead SeriesAnd here is a link to my page, Cjoatey So check them out!! Thanks!!
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Jul 10 2008, 3:25 PM EDT
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Change: good." I said, smiling with a sense of hope for the first time since thisit started. Author's Note: I have the first part of the sequel posted, here's a link: Land of the Damned
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Jul 10 2008, 3:42 AM EDT
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Change: "Stop, Tim." Jennifer said. "What is it." I asked. "I saw someone move." She said. "A zombie?" I asked. "No, it was holding a gun
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Jul 10 2008, 2:56 AM EDT
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Change: Icrouched in the underbrush, lining up on the ten-point buck in the clearing. I sighed as I pulled the trigger. The deer dropped, and I
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Jul 9 2008, 1:59 PM EDT
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Change: We were making sixty easy down main street when Jennifer looked over at me. "Where are we going?" She asked. "To Walmart, then the hunting
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Jul 9 2008, 1:10 PM EDT
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Change: I started the truck, and opened the garage door and drove out. I drove towards the store, running over the occasional one of those things,
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Jul 9 2008, 3:13 AM EDT
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Change: "No problem." She said. "Mommy, what's wrong?" My five-year old daughter, Jessica, asked. "Yes honey, every thing's alright." Jennifer said, instantly all motherly concern. I
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Jul 9 2008, 2:55 AM EDT
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Change: That awful screaming came again, and I jumped up and slammed the door shut. "Wait here." I said, running up the stairs. I threw the
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Jul 9 2008, 1:35 AM EDT
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Change: The thing hit me and the gun flew out of my hands as Jennifer screamed. "Go upstairs!" I screamed, as the thing tried to bite
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Jul 8 2008, 9:22 PM EDT
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Change: Tim rolled over in bed, his wife murmuring in her sleep. "Why are you up?" His wife, Jennifer, asked. "Heard something." He replied. "What?" Jennifer
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Jul 8 2008, 8:01 PM EDT
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Change: There were only format changes (bold, italics, etc.) in this version. See this version for details.
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