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	woody100		great story	0	Aug 26 2008, 6:05 AM EDT by woody100
			Thread started: Aug 26 2008, 6:05 AM EDT Watch yeh i thought that was really good, but the only flaw for me was, they all called each other by their codename, wouldnt he call his freinds by their real names??? lol but yeh good story Do you find this valuable? Keyword tags: None Post reply
	Shadow4437		I'm going to give you advice and give you constructive critcism.	0	Apr 23 2008, 10:44 PM EDT by Shadow4437
			Thread started: Apr 23 2008, 10:44 PM EDT Watch Hi,I liked your story,but there were many flaws,1000 rounds in general is alot of ammunition to carry,weighing more than 20 pounds,and 15,000 rounds would be an noneffective way to move in combat,with that much ammunition.Secondly,I seriously can't believe how you exaggerated numbers.Its nearly impossible to take down hundreds of zombies with 1000 rounds with fully automatic weapons.Then theres the fact that he somehow prepared this trap.It would take atleast 3 days to prepare,for wiring/soldering and to get it set. 3 out of 3 found this valuable. Do you find this valuable? Do you? Keyword tags: None Post reply
	whtwlf		Minor Error	0	Apr 19 2008, 10:28 PM EDT by whtwlf
			Thread started: Apr 19 2008, 10:28 PM EDT Watch The story states that "Zeta class" is "The elite class of its kind." However, Z13 states that Z68 and Z148 are both "lowly ranked troops that never really proved themselves." If they are poor in combat, then why not just label them X or Y class? 3 out of 3 found this valuable. Do you find this valuable? Do you? Keyword tags: None Post reply

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