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Location: Sacrifices and Survival - working title
Discussion: Heres a space for comments and such
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 Halomanjohnsen |
Heres a space for comments and such
Feb 25 2008, 9:24 PM EST thanks for w/e u send 2 out of 4 found this valuable. Do you? |
 cipher234 |
RE: Heres a space for comments and such
Feb 26 2008, 4:12 PM EST as I said on the other forum its has a nice opening Do you find this valuable? |
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Halomanjohnsen |
RE: Heres a space for comments and such
Feb 26 2008, 4:54 PM EST yea thanks, i didnt go to skool today so im gonna pick it up tm ill get it on here asap Do you find this valuable? |
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Halomanjohnsen |
RE: Heres a space for comments and such
Feb 27 2008, 10:13 PM EST added the rest of the intro and part of chapter one Do you find this valuable? |
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zombieshoota207 zombieshoota207 |
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Mar 24 2008, 5:33 PM EDT "as I said on the other forum its has a nice opening"I wonder why I am not good with openings most of the time. Do you find this valuable? |
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Halomanjohnsen |
RE: Heres a space for comments and such
Mar 26 2008, 6:08 PM EDT i just like to start in the middle of a combat sceen. Like i was at my friends house and i was writing for no reason, and i came up with this: The M249 clattered as the driver hit another curb sending ammo and supplies flying...... And that was just off-the-bat-w/e-i-come-up-with Do you find this valuable? |
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Halomanjohnsen |
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Apr 1 2008, 7:18 PM EDT Ok, added more to the story, I may add more later tonight, but if not today them tomarrow. lol i got bored sorry Do you find this valuable? |
 Legion12 |
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Apr 2 2008, 11:27 AM EDT With what little writing I have done the first page is always the hard one. It's like in the first few lines you have to set the whole location for the book. " The rain was ice cold as we lay in the grass not moving, our goretex had long since lost the battle to keep us dry. I took my hand off my rifles pistol grip and looked at my watch, dirt water ran out of my leather fingerless glove, 30 min and we have to move, regardless" Just shooting from the hip with that. Do you find this valuable? |
