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I'm going to give you advice and give you constructive critcism.
Apr 23 2008, 10:44 PM EDT
Hi,I liked your story,but there were many flaws,1000 rounds in general is alot of ammunition to carry,weighing more than 20 pounds,and 15,000 rounds would be an noneffective way to move in combat,with that much ammunition.Secondly,I seriously can't believe how you exaggerated numbers.Its nearly impossible to take down hundreds of zombies with 1000 rounds with fully automatic weapons.Then theres the fact that he somehow prepared this trap.It would take atleast 3 days to prepare,for wiring/soldering and to get it set.
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