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AZ-Terminator001
AZ-Terminator001
The Story
Jun 20 2008, 7:47 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 20 2008, 7:47 AM EDT
Well? what do you guys think?
This is Still a work in progress, so feel free to add any ideas. 2  out of 2 found this valuable. Do you?    
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cjoatey
cjoatey
1. RE: The Story
Jun 20 2008, 11:16 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 20 2008, 11:16 AM EDT
sounds good! Do you find this valuable?    
cjoatey
cjoatey
2. RE: The Story
Jun 21 2008, 3:59 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 21 2008, 3:59 PM EDT
really like chapter 1!!!! Do you find this valuable?    
Angel_956
Angel_956
3. RE: The Story
Jun 26 2008, 3:23 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 26 2008, 3:23 PM EDT
Great story coming along =] Do you find this valuable?    
cjoatey
cjoatey
4. RE: The Story
Jun 27 2008, 6:10 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 27 2008, 6:10 PM EDT
Give me more!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Do you find this valuable?    
13th.Casualty
13th.Casualty
5. RE: The Story
Jun 27 2008, 6:28 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 27 2008, 6:28 PM EDT
I love it! Nice use of vocab, grammar, and punctuation. Good job! Do you find this valuable?    
AZ-Terminator001
AZ-Terminator001
6. RE: The Story
Jul 2 2008, 5:51 AM EDT | Post edited: Jul 2 2008, 5:51 AM EDT
Thanks for the positive feedback guys, it's great you enjoyed it.
However, I will start working on another story, which has no relevance to Sub-Zero breakout.
I will be adding a few chapters here and there for Sub-Zero breakout, but my next project will be the one I will be working the most on. About my new story? Well let's just say I'm taking the Zombie genre and tombstoning/ flipping/ turning it on its head so hard that people will , lets just say, be polarised for or against me (hopefully). Do you find this valuable?    
AZ-Terminator001
AZ-Terminator001
7. RE: The Story
Jul 4 2008, 6:36 AM EDT | Post edited: Jul 4 2008, 6:36 AM EDT
"Thanks for the positive feedback guys, it's great you enjoyed it.
However, I will start working on another story, which has no relevance to Sub-Zero breakout.
I will be adding a few chapters here and there for Sub-Zero breakout, but my next project will be the one I will be working the most on. About my new story? Well let's just say I'm taking the Zombie genre and tombstoning/ flipping/ turning it on its head so hard that people will , lets just say, be polarised for or against me (hopefully)."
No, I'll be taking the genre and turning/ flipping it on its head hard. VERY hard (hopefully). Do you find this valuable?    
AZ-Terminator001
AZ-Terminator001
8. RE: The Story
Jul 10 2008, 7:47 PM EDT | Post edited: Jul 10 2008, 7:47 PM EDT
Okay. I plan on breaking up Sub-Zero breakout into blocks of 10 chapters. So stay tuned for Part 2! Do you find this valuable?    
snakethezombiehunter
snakethezombiehunter
9. RE: The Story
Aug 31 2008, 7:45 PM EDT | Post edited: Aug 31 2008, 7:45 PM EDT
Its good for the most part, but i think u over did it a bit with all the star wars nicknames. Star Wars is cool and all, but i think that it was a bit over the top. Just my personal opinion. Do you find this valuable?    

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