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Location: Outbreak, Recovery, Cover Up
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 13th.Casualty |
Comments, Suggestions, Criticisms
Jun 27 2008, 7:07 PM EDT I will gladly accept any comments, suggestions, or criticisms. 5 out of 5 found this valuable. Do you? |
 cjoatey |
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Jun 27 2008, 8:14 PM EDT Awesome! Really freaking awesome! Do you find this valuable? |
 AZ-Terminator001 |
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Jun 29 2008, 7:25 AM EDT Nice! love how it really puts a human face on this outbreak. Can't wait for more! Do you find this valuable? |
 Original-Sin |
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Jun 30 2008, 1:32 AM EDT Nice, cant wait to see the rest. Message me when you update it will yeah :P Do you find this valuable? |
 necrolyte |
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Jun 30 2008, 7:37 AM EDT If I was there i would take my Steyr Aug and a chainsaw to slay em zombies Do you find this valuable? |
 CarneyZombie |
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Jun 30 2008, 2:33 PM EDT this looks like its gonna great, i don't really reread books but id read this one till i knew the words by heart!!! Do you find this valuable? |
 doxkid |
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Jun 30 2008, 10:23 PM EDT pretty good Do you find this valuable? |
 .andrew |
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Jul 1 2008, 1:36 AM EDT damn good work! Do you find this valuable? |
 Ventanator |
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Jul 1 2008, 2:39 PM EDT Pretty nice hombre. Do you find this valuable? |
 TheTrooper671 |
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Jul 3 2008, 8:59 AM EDT This story is going great man. Theres a sight I go to that has excellent zombie stories you should go to it. www.talesofthezombiewar.com Great site man trust me. Do you find this valuable? |
 residentmagnum |
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Jul 4 2008, 2:29 AM EDT Hey I glanced it over it is very nice Do you find this valuable? |
 srmcguirk |
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Jul 7 2008, 12:13 PM EDT I like it. It's better than a lot of zombie fiction being published these days. You could have a future as an author. 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
 BanditJack |
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Aug 9 2008, 5:23 PM EDT The NSA doesn't actually conduct many field operations, in fact they don't have guys for that. (Despite popular lore surrounding the agency) They're analysts, codebreakers, and the guys that read your email. (Hello Mr. NSA guy! Hope you're well.) And there is neither a plausible reason to bring a missile launcher on an op, nor immediate access to such resources for teams operating in the US. Do you find this valuable? |
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13th.Casualty |
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Aug 9 2008, 5:31 PM EDT I've already prepared for that. It will be explained later in the story. Do you find this valuable? |
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AZ-Terminator001 |
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Sep 2 2008, 6:44 AM EDT Cuban States? Cuban Government gets control of US? Iraq becomes US territory? Iraqis continue war in US? Now I fully respect the right of free speech, but there is a saying: "Just because you can, doesn't mean you should" I mean, you don't see the US instating Osama Bin Laden as head of Homeland security. I mean, it's like giving Ali Khamenei control of the US nuclear stockpile. Just some feedback, and still loving the story despite that. Do you find this valuable? |
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13th.Casualty |
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Oct 12 2008, 11:35 PM EDT "I've already prepared for that. It will be explained later in the story."Yeah...read that. Do you find this valuable? |
