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AZ-Terminator001 |
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AZ-Terminator001 |
2. RE: My Story
Jul 5 2008, 3:36 AM EDT
"Interesting" crap, "Interesting" good or "Interesting" new?(Sorry, just like knowing these things) Do you find this valuable? |
13th.Casualty |
3. RE: My Story
Jul 5 2008, 11:03 PM EDT
Wow! This is a new take on zombie fiction. So far anyway. You could do wonders with this story. Right now though, you could really use an "organizationcheck," just so it's easier to read.
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Mr.Xeight |
4. RE: My Story
Jul 5 2008, 11:59 PM EDT
The idea f people being able to hunt zombies is just so freakin sick on so many levels.
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cjoatey |
5. RE: My Story
Jul 11 2008, 3:24 AM EDT
""Interesting" crap, "Interesting" good or "Interesting" new?Interesting good!!! I like it!! Do you find this valuable? |
hillbilly909 |
6. RE: My Story
Aug 10 2008, 2:17 PM EDT
Are you going to be making a second one?cuz u should. Do you find this valuable? |
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AZ-Terminator001 |
7. RE: My Story
Aug 11 2008, 7:47 AM EDT
"Are you going to be making a second one?It's great you like my story. However, I've hit a kind-of roadblock in this story. Once part 2 of Sub-Zero Breakout is completed, I'll have a pretty good idea of where the story is going to go. Do you find this valuable? |
shaguar1337 |
8. RE: My Story
May 3 2009, 3:40 PM EDT
I would add on to it, or if you want it to be short like that, then publish it as a short story. thats how i did it. wrote a short story, then added onto it and made a novel.
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vengence94 |
9. RE: My Story
May 7 2009, 11:08 PM EDT
yeah man i would add on to it. I am really curious of what is going to happen:)
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humanroach |
10. RE: My Story
May 7 2009, 11:23 PM EDT
dont use james so much. we know his name and who you are talking about. instead use HIM HIS HE etc.
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John199312 |
11. RE: My Story
Jun 23 2009, 12:47 AM EDT
"dont use james so much. we know his name and who you are talking about. instead use HIM HIS HE etc."True, but if anyone else is in the scene, use the name. Do you find this valuable? |
John_234 |
12. RE: My Story
Jun 23 2009, 12:49 AM EDT
"True, but if anyone else is in the scene, use the name."As it is however, the author refers to the character as James damn near every time they refer to him. Do you find this valuable? |
wkwkwkwk1 |
13. RE: My Story
Mar 7 2012, 4:32 PM EST
great!btw, isn't it forbidden to use language like f*ck (without the asterisk)? Do you find this valuable? |
SasquatchJim |
14. RE: My Story
Mar 7 2012, 8:11 PM EST
I think this was written before the language restrictions were put into effect, so IIRC it's exempt.
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wkwkwkwk1 |
15. RE: My Story
Mar 8 2012, 3:26 AM EST
"I think this was written before the language restrictions were put into effect, so IIRC it's exempt."thanks for the explanation Do you find this valuable? |
