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byates |
1. RE: Great Story!
Aug 7 2008, 11:42 PM EDT
Thank you, I have noticed that in a sudden disaster there tend to be two types that survive, the prepared and the lucky. Writing about the prepared would be boring, instructive, but boring. Writing about the lucky can be more interesting. I have been reading some of Robert Howard's short stories, not his fantasy but the ones about cowboys, sailors, and detectives. I tried to follow his style, at bit anyway.
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2. RE: Great Story!
Aug 9 2008, 2:51 PM EDT
Very interesting start! I hope to see Bill make a few (if not a few more) genuine mistakes that have actual consequences. I'm tired of stories where the protagonist never makes mistakes, or makes mistakes that happen to lead the entire group to a well-supplied bunker.
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3. RE: Great Story!
Aug 9 2008, 3:00 PM EDT
"Very interesting start! I hope to see Bill make a few (if not a few more) genuine mistakes that have actual consequences. I'm tired of stories where the protagonist never makes mistakes, or makes mistakes that happen to lead the entire group to a well-supplied bunker."Don't worry, Bill is going to screwup, not fatally, but will be knocked back a few times. Do you find this valuable? |
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