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1. RE: The Start
Dec 7 2008, 4:59 PM EST
Fantastic! The map itself is brilliant. I'd really like to see a world map of this, but I know that these are quite time consuming to make. Brilliant story line as well, interesting way of introducing the back-story.
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IrishHitman |
2. RE: The Start
Dec 7 2008, 5:09 PM EST
"Fantastic! The map itself is brilliant. I'd really like to see a world map of this, but I know that these are quite time consuming to make. Brilliant story line as well, interesting way of introducing the back-story."With GIMP, the map making is actually really quick (I have the unit markers from a previous project of mine). Unfortunately, the high quality, easily edited map of Europe with rivers does not exist for the rest of the world. So other maps would be far less impressive.. Do you find this valuable? |
3DayAsylum |
3. RE: The Start
Dec 7 2008, 5:14 PM EST
I like it, especially how you made us Americans (I believe) look like total assholes, because really, every one of us is an asshole, if you dig deep down...COMPLETE HONESTY Do you find this valuable? |
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IrishHitman |
4. RE: The Start
Dec 7 2008, 5:17 PM EST
"I like it, especially how you made us Americans (I believe) look like total assholes, because really, every one of us is an asshole, if you dig deep down...The fat lad isn't representative of the whole country. You'll see that us Europeans are assholes as well.whenever I start the actual combat chapters. Especially with remaining survivors. Do you find this valuable? |
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3DayAsylum |
5. RE: The Start
Dec 7 2008, 5:26 PM EST
No, I mean really, you'd have to be hard pressed to find an American that isn't an asshole.
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IrishHitman |
6. RE: The Start
Dec 7 2008, 5:29 PM EST
"No, I mean really, you'd have to be hard pressed to find an American that isn't an asshole."Oh? Isn't that just everyone in the Western world? Do you find this valuable? |
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3DayAsylum |
7. RE: The Start
Dec 7 2008, 5:37 PM EST
Pretty much. And that includes me. Even right now, because I'm calling the whole western world an asshole.
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DaveBall |
8. RE: The Start
Dec 7 2008, 6:52 PM EST
You usually see others as you are? I know allot of People American's, Europeans, and Middle Eastern who are great friendly, and like to be helpful.
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10. Us asshole Americans:
Dec 7 2008, 7:01 PM EST
"No, I mean really, you'd have to be hard pressed to find an American that isn't an asshole."That's true. I sold HitMan the entire US Eastern Seaboard for some booze kuz I'm an asshole, I fart in an empty elevator and hop out before it goes to a different floor kuz I'm an asshole, I make fun of people kuz I'm an asshole, I called the teachers Fascist sons of bitches at school kuz I'm an asshole, there are people on Z-day that are top priority kills kuz I'm an asshole; the list goes on. Do you find this valuable? |
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AgEnT_GrEEn |
11. RE: The Start
Dec 7 2008, 7:03 PM EST
By the way, the story's really good, please continue with it!
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IrishHitman |
12. RE: The Start
Dec 7 2008, 10:51 PM EST
Updated.A little character development goes a long way. Do you find this valuable? |
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IrishHitman |
15. RE: The Start
Dec 8 2008, 5:59 PM EST
"Good opener, keep it going.Glad you think so. I've tried to reflect European and American cultural elements regarding control. Europe has a centralised state with an official military because we Europeans prefer government intervention in many cases. Americans on the other hand are much more self-reliant according to your own philosophy, and so I made America vastly uncontrolled with thousands of self-ruling survivor settlements. Do you find this valuable? |
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3DayAsylum |
16. RE: The Start
Dec 9 2008, 9:32 PM EST
Personally, (disregarding previous sarcastic remarks), I like it, and would like to see it grow. Mainly because it's very well written, and has a good plot (so far, so don't fuck it up).
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3DayAsylum |
17. RE: The Start
Dec 9 2008, 9:33 PM EST
"You usually see others as you are?"I agree. Do you find this valuable? |
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IrishHitman |
18. RE: The Start
Dec 10 2008, 1:58 PM EST
"Personally, (disregarding previous sarcastic remarks), I like it, and would like to see it grow. Mainly because it's very well written, and has a good plot (so far, so don't fuck it up)."Oh? Do you find this valuable? |
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