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Crashr
Crashr
Time for a new page
Apr 18 2009, 7:03 PM EDT | Post edited: Apr 18 2009, 7:03 PM EDT
Hey guys. It's that time again, when the current page gets insanely long and a plot device comes along that gives us the oppertunity for a break in the action. I think the escape from the bio facility is a pretty major event, and we shud start anew. Feedback? Do you find this valuable?    
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matt_will
matt_will
1. RE: Time for a new page
Apr 19 2009, 4:18 AM EDT | Post edited: Apr 19 2009, 4:18 AM EDT
We can't escape yet. Captain Daniels, Heather and Mak are still at the Security room. If we escaped now, we would be abandoning them. Do you find this valuable?    
Crashr
Crashr
2. RE: Time for a new page
Apr 19 2009, 11:08 AM EDT | Post edited: Apr 19 2009, 11:08 AM EDT
Oh geez. I completely forgot about them. Do you find this valuable?    
matt_will
matt_will
3. RE: Time for a new page
Apr 19 2009, 2:36 PM EDT | Post edited: Apr 19 2009, 2:36 PM EDT
Thats ok I forget about characters all the time. I forget where Frank was, that Calvin was Xombies character not yours ect... Do you find this valuable?    
Nexus_Oblivion
Nexus_Oblivion
4. RE: Time for a new page
Apr 21 2009, 7:11 AM EDT | Post edited: Apr 21 2009, 7:11 AM EDT
Hey guys,

Letting you know that I'll be writing Heather's part, hopefully in the next few days.
Oh, and I know it's a little too late to mention, but Derek Washington's not a major; He's a colonel.
A Major is actually a lower rank then a Colonel in the US army. So he should be a colonel now instead of a major.

Um...that's all I got. Do you find this valuable?    
matt_will
matt_will
5. RE: Time for a new page
Apr 22 2009, 11:11 AM EDT | Post edited: Apr 22 2009, 11:11 AM EDT
I'll change that then. I'm not good with military ranks. Do you find this valuable?    
Nexus_Oblivion
Nexus_Oblivion
6. RE: Time for a new page
Apr 22 2009, 9:47 PM EDT | Post edited: Apr 22 2009, 9:47 PM EDT
update: I wont be....
I'm doing part 100, which will be the last one for this page, before we make "book 2"
(xombiez has part 99) Do you find this valuable?    
Nexus_Oblivion
Nexus_Oblivion
7. RE: Time for a new page
Apr 29 2009, 7:23 PM EDT | Post edited: Apr 29 2009, 7:23 PM EDT
Alrighty then!

I'm working on the final part of this page.
expect it to be on here and the CS site in roughly 24 hours. Do you find this valuable?