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John_234 |
Need Characters
Jul 8 2009, 10:22 PM EDT
So far this has been fairly character devoid. Any type of story needs characters, so I'd like to get a few from you guys.So toss in a few characters and a brief description. -Name -Physical Description / Gear -Personality -Character Flaws -Proficiencies -Notes Any special conditions, what you'd like me to avoid writing them into. etc. I shouldn't really have to say this, but keep it realistic. If you include callsigns, make sure they have a real name as well. Weapons shouldn't be uncommon without good reason, and they shouldn't be perfect at everything. Thanks in advance for any input. 2 out of 2 found this valuable. Do you? |
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1. RE: Need Characters
Jul 8 2009, 11:08 PM EDT
Name: David FosterPhysical Description: A bit shorter than the average person, but has a toned body. His hair is black and kept short, and has a trimmed goatee and mustache. He has a big scar across his left hand (this is NOT from zombies). His outfit is pretty dull, blue-jeans and a camoflage T-shirt. Equipment: A Remington 870 Marine Magnum 12 guage, and has a holstered Glock 19. Personality: Has a very controlled temper, and normally doesn't favor conversation. He knows when and when it is not necessary to fight. Character Flaws: Smokes cigarettes more than normal, but not to the level of a chain smoker. Under pressure, operates worse than normal people under the same pressure. Proficiencies: Welding, computer programming, and flying prop planes. Notes-None. 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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John_234 |
2. RE: Need Characters
Jul 8 2009, 11:14 PM EDT
Thanks! Would you imagine him in any specific role?
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3. RE: Need Characters
Jul 8 2009, 11:16 PM EDT
I don't know where this story is going, but if you want the team to *eventually* go to Nastya's, he could be the guy that leads them there.Otherwise, I'm not sure. 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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4. RE: Need Characters
Jul 8 2009, 11:20 PM EDT
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Name: Silvester "Fester" BachPhysical Description: 6'3", age 34, in great shape, brown hair(very short), no facial hair, slight limp in the left leg. Clothing: A pair of Wolverine boots, khaki cargo jeans, Metallica jacket**, ACU Crossdraw Tactical Vest. Gear: .243 Remington 700, SIG P229 Personality: Silent, professional, efficient, harsh. Character Flaws: Not exactly the most social. Proficiencies: Marksmanship, evasion, stealth, survival. Notes: For 8 years, he was in the U.S. Army, 82nd Airborne, as the designated squad marksman, has an English Lit degree, Masters. Plays bass guitar. Keeps his husky, Dog, nearby at all times. ** http://www.marketmusic.co.uk/photos/large/metallica_borisf.jpg EDIT: Goddammit, Why, you stole my generic character! 4 out of 4 found this valuable. Do you? |
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5. RE: Need Characters
Jul 8 2009, 11:48 PM EDT
Name : Eddie "Crow" GordoPhysical description : Long black hair over the eyes, Leather jacket, Jeans and riding boots, Well toned but not over-dramatic Gear : .357 revolver and a crowbar Personality : Kept to himself Character flaws : bad temper, gets angry fast. Proficiencies : great aim and agile 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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6. RE: Need Characters
Jul 8 2009, 11:52 PM EDT
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Name Jennifer GoldePhysical description : The hot one Long blond hair, good figure Gear : a 9mm pistol her dad gave her before he turned, her chearleading outfit, which she wants no blood on. Personality : Bubbly, open, gets in the way at sometimes Character flaws : gets in the way, and always wants to look in a mirror Proficiencies : Stealthy, fast, ability to fit into smaller places 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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John_234 |
7. RE: Need Characters
Jul 8 2009, 11:55 PM EDT
Great stuff guys. One request though, for gear, could you edit in their load bearing gear and the like?As in, do they wear some surplus 'nam suspenders, or a plate carrier, etc. 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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8. RE: Need Characters
Jul 9 2009, 3:17 AM EDT
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Name: Roderick BlairPhysical Description: In his late-twenties to early-thirties, physically fit, has a hight of six-foot-four, has long white hair (it turned white early), brown eyes, naturally harsh eyebrows, which stayed black, a black goatee, has remarkably white teeth, a tattoo of a quarter note on the upper portion of his left arm, and has the fourth finger of his right hand has a huge scar running down it. Gear: His WWII-vet grandfather's M1 Garand, his 'Nam vet, gun nut uncle's M16, both simply strapped on, some generic, steel toed army boots, a kukri that he cleans and polishes at every logical interval, a balisong, and a smoking pipe that he very occasionally uses. Personality: Quiet and professional. When he talks, you know it's worth hearing. Hard to scare. Very focused. Doesn't acquire attachments easily, but when he does, he's extremely loyal. Brave, but intelegently so. Detatched and objective: he comes upon a bloodbath, he feels almost nothing. Character flaws: Hard to comunicate with. Headstrong; doesn't like to follow, only likes to lead. Because of his lack of attachments and communication, most people come to dislike him. He is to his kukri as Indiana Jones is to his hat: He'd risk limb and life for it. Proficiencies: Makes a good demo man; he has an almost encyclopedic knowledge of improv explosives and such. A quiet professional: makes for a good assasin. Highly skilled with firearms. A knowledgeable mantrapper. Well versed in improvised weaponry. NOTE: A quarter note looks like this: ♩ He has served as a mercenary in Havana. He's Canadian. His fiance was killed by zombies before his eyes. NOTE FROM DREWBLET: Is it okay if I steal this guy for my own stories? I just realized that he's such a quality character that I'd like to use him, myself. I could change his name for mine, if you prefer. 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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John_234 |
9. RE: Need Characters
Jul 9 2009, 3:20 AM EDT
You're entitled to your own character and using it.
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Drewblet |
10. RE: Need Characters
Jul 9 2009, 3:28 AM EDT
"You're entitled to your own character and using it."Once again, you can use him; I just wondered if you minded if I used the same guy. And I will change his name for my yarns. I've got a female character that I'l add here, later, by the way. 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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11. RE: Need Characters
Jul 9 2009, 3:29 AM EDT
I mean, I use Fester in a few places I go to.
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12. RE: Need Characters
Jul 9 2009, 5:25 AM EDT
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-Name: Alice [Kupkake] Hampton-Physical Description: White, 5'7, Black Emo Mop-Top with red highlights, green eyes, emo glasses, 120lbs, pretty face, hourglass frame, thorn tattoos on forearms -Gear: UTG universal shoulder rig, Zippo lighter, lock-picking kit, 1st aid kit, black side-bag, canteen -Arms: CCW Glock 26 [9mm] w/2 spare mags -Misc. arms: Switchblade, Mace, knife necklace, streetfighting -Outfit: Dark-grayish blue faded jeans, studded belt spraypainted black, black hoody [sleeves partially rolled up], black Senses Fail t-shirt, red chuck-taylor all-stars [has scribbles, drawings and stuff on them], 2 black terrycloth wristbands, earrings and nose-stud on left nostril -Personality: Alice was your stereotypical scene kid, until she met Jack at a rock concert. She then evolved to a hardier, reslilent figure in the following years as she hung out with/fell in love with him and lived the way he did. She was with Jack while they were heading to the local hangout when the outbreak occured. -Character Flaws: Doesn't take shit from people, sometimes likes to make Jack get pissed, sarcastic, little too anti-authoritarian at times, mocks people if they whine or bitch, glares at people she doesn't like, sings emo music a lot while in safety...much to the chargin of the team -Proficiencies: Lock-picking, hotwiring, driving civy-based vehicles, 1st aid, scrounging, CCW handguns -Notes Survivor at heart, her and Jack are inseparable 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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John_234 |
13. RE: Need Characters
Jul 9 2009, 5:47 AM EDT
I'm guessing you want me to pair her with whatever character you chose for yourself?
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14. RE: Need Characters
Jul 9 2009, 5:51 AM EDT
"I'm guessing you want me to pair her with whatever character you chose for yourself?"Yep. I'll have him up in a bit. :) 1 out of 2 found this valuable. Do you? |
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15. RE: Need Characters
Jul 9 2009, 6:38 AM EDT
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-Name: Jack Stryker-Physical Description: White, 6'0, 190lbs, bald, clean-shaven, has tribal tattoos on arms, well-toned -Gear: SWAT vest with attatched duty belt, weak leg rig and thigh holster from downed SRT officer, Zippo lighter, OD nylon-band wristwatch, canteen -Outfit: Aviators, black muscle tee, Megadeth hoody**, dark gray cargoes, two black terrycloth wristbands, wristwatch is fitted over the left, black fingerless gloves, black beanie, combat boots -Arms: SIG P226 with two mags found in vest, CCW Glock 26 with 2 spare mags, has 8rds for a 12g shotgun, but no shotgun -misc arms: Bootknife, knife necklace, brass knuckles, streetfighting -Personality: Former cop, was laid off from city budget cuts and delved into the local counter-culture he once loathed.... Jack retains his professionalism admidst his otherwise delinquent life in the rougher parts of the city. He was out to go to the local hangout with his woman, Alice, but had to bug out instead. -Character Flaws: Gets primal if he thinks anyone's causing harm to his woman, will upon occasion cast people he can't stand in harm's way, suspicious but not paranoid, holds seemingly eternal grudges and he lets them run deep, brutally honest, sarcastic at times, makes fun of whiners, drinks strong Lagers, Rum and Whisky [will also drink whatever's available minus absinthe], smokes cigars [will not smoke anything else except out of a tobacco pipe] -Proficiencies: situational command, general survival skills, room-clearing, searching people [more likely to find stuff in bodies], map-reading, scrounging, 1st aid, swimming, radio comms, plays guitar rreally well -Notes Survivor at heart Here are the links: http://www.megadeth.com/images/productrightcolumn-hoody2.jpg 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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16. RE: Need Characters
Jul 9 2009, 8:12 AM EDT
name: David sivvianphysical description: bony, but fast. very endurable, once took a punch to the head from a heavy weight boxer but remained standing, that is how he got his tattoo saying: heavy weight buster. he also likes to have a number 2 buzz cut. gear/weapons: dual machetes, berreta9mm. handgun, a double barrel shotgun with a sawn off barrel, knapsack, emergency kit, water bottle, a dirt bike which he has used ever since highway travel was impossible, & a leather jacket to make him look dangerous. personality: patient & independent. whenever others offer assistance, his number on catch phrase is: "i don't play nicely with others." his independence can be an advantage, as he does not rely on others so heavily because of it. used to working very hard & only putting food on the table for one person. weaknesses: his lone wolf style makes him an easy target. this also makes him unable to perform tasks that require more than one person. he says that others will just be obstacles in terms of supplies. advantages & skills: creative & improvising, once took out a hoard with a broken car & a wooden stick. tough & fast, could go for 2 weeks without food & 5 days without water. is used to the poor lifestyle & does not complain about lack of luxuries. will eat anything that is good for him, no matter what the taste. is a good shot at long distances, &adapts very quickly. notes: the average lone wolf survivor. 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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17. RE: Need Characters
Jul 9 2009, 8:25 AM EDT
name: Greg Davisphysical description: chubby, short, long hair, & very energetic gear/weapons: H&k UMP 45 sub machine gun, chainsaw, Kevlar vest, full camping gear & a HUMVEE. personality: used to the good life, used to be rich & popular before z-day. hates animals unless they are cooked with sauce. very fussy, & his inherited wealth made him not try hard at anything, & he only was in college to flirt & hang out with his friends. character weaknesses: very fussy, has tantrums when not the leader or center of attention, & his wealth from before z-day made him very demanding. most of his group wonder why they don't make him sleep outside their hideout. he is very arrogant & stuck up, this makes others treat him with little respect. advantages & skills: sometimes his clumsiness can cause chaos & confusion among the enemies. he is also a good laugh to keep the spirits up, & others enjoy his arguing with the survivors that he looks down on. can also be a good distraction for any bug out plan if you leave him behind. he also had shooting lessons with his millionare father, who owns several gunstores as part of his luxury. he was never a good shot, but is good at cleaning & maintaining weapons. note: a brat. basically the paris hilton of the post z-day world. status: lucky to be alive with some smart capable friends. 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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18. RE: Need Characters
Jul 9 2009, 8:32 AM EDT
NOTE TO JOHN: You don't have to use all the characters people say.*cough* *points up* *cough* 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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John_234 |
19. RE: Need Characters
Jul 9 2009, 8:34 AM EDT
I'm sorry, but these last two posts are just hard to read........how did the second fellow acquire a HUMVEE?
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