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Anti-Hero |
Input?
Sep 28 2009, 2:29 AM EDT
Pretty self explanatory, feel free to be as honest as you want.
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Zombie fiction
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1. RE: Input?
Sep 28 2009, 5:02 AM EDT
"Pretty self explanatory, feel free to be as honest as you want."The introduction was REALLY well made, I liked it alot. There were some minor spelling mistakes though, and the latter part of Gabriels part was a bit bad with you repeating his name alot. I love all the characters though, they seem like the kind of people you would find trying to survive, only one thing I would like to see though, is you trying to knit them all together (well to begin with, gabriel and allie could find eachother, and the family seem to have found other survivors in the store). Do you find this valuable? |
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2. RE: Input?
Nov 13 2010, 4:50 PM EST
"Pretty self explanatory, feel free to be as honest as you want."I thought it was really good, and rather realistic with the different kinds of people you would find. Well done mate! =) Do you find this valuable? |
