Sign in or 
Share this
Showing 2 posts
Andrew1602 |
Wow!
Nov 16 2009, 5:47 PM EST
Wow! That was very well written. Congrats! I also like how you ended on Chapter 13; unlucky 13. My only critique is that the story seems to be a bit rushed. You hurried to the point; it could have been longer. But, beyond that, I loved it! The cliffhanger was very good. Great job!!
Do you find this valuable?
Keyword tags:
None
|
dominickmagas |
1. RE: Wow!
Jan 28 2010, 2:53 AM EST
i often have that problem :( i LOVE writing, but, being only being 14 when i wrote that story, i didnt have much experience in writing a lengthier piece. The fact that i just sat down and pumped it out in a day didn't help much either. if I were to write it now, it would be much different, but i still have a long way to go. i'm working on-and-off on a sequel, which has been over a year in the making, and it shaping up to be much better, with better pacing, character development, and plotline. it should be much better, if i ever finish lol
Do you find this valuable?
|
