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Ammo, Apocalypse, and Alcohol
Aug 19 2010, 4:03 AM EDT
So I'm plugging my first attempt at a zombie story. Rotten title, I know. I have written other stuff before, but nothing really along these lines. I have more parts partially written, and this is just the begining, so let me know what you think. If nothing else, look for the movie quotes I placed in the story. Easter eggs are always fun, right?
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ItsMrManCub |
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Aug 19 2010, 4:14 AM EDT
"So I'm plugging my first attempt at a zombie story. Rotten title, I know. I have written other stuff before, but nothing really along these lines. I have more parts partially written, and this is just the begining, so let me know what you think. If nothing else, look for the movie quotes I placed in the story. Easter eggs are always fun, right?"Already read it. Loved it! Do you find this valuable? |
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DevilNuts |
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Aug 19 2010, 4:24 AM EDT
I didn't get to the entire thing, but it appears to be very well written.
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Madurjafro |
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Aug 19 2010, 5:37 AM EDT
Wow that was pretty sweet, Make sequel nao!
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jjthomas3 |
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Aug 19 2010, 7:39 AM EDT
Great story, can't wait for the sequel.
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DevilNuts |
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Aug 19 2010, 7:49 AM EDT
The title definitely needs work though.
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SasquatchJim |
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Aug 19 2010, 8:17 AM EDT
I haven't read it all yet. But I like what I've read so far.Loved the reference to zombie survival websites :) I actually like the title. It has a sort of campiness that it important in zombie stories. Do you find this valuable? |
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EastCoaster9000 |
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Aug 19 2010, 10:20 AM EDT
Great story!
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toxic_shock |
8. RE: Ammo, Apocalypse, and Alcohol
Aug 19 2010, 6:10 PM EDT
Hey thanks everybody. I appriciate the comments. One thing I would like to know is if the way I added the "music" over the last sceen worked or not. I was looking for a way for the reader to "hear" the music as the scene progressed. And you gotta have zombie-killing tunes!
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EdOfTheDead2 |
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Aug 19 2010, 7:25 PM EDT
This is almost as good as Jim's novel. Almost. : )
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SasquatchJim |
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Aug 19 2010, 9:09 PM EDT
"This is almost as good as Jim's novel. Almost. : ) "LOL, you REALLY like that, don't you? Thanks. Do you find this valuable? |
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KevinKY |
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Aug 20 2010, 1:55 PM EDT
I really liked, I delayed packing for college just to read the rest of it ^.^and the music part, it worked, to an extent, since I barely know the songs. Do you find this valuable? |
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toxic_shock |
12. RE: Ammo, Apocalypse, and Alcohol
Oct 28 2010, 1:59 PM EDT
Alright! Earlier this week I caught a break in the site's BS to get part 2 posted. It turned out kinda long, so beware.
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TandC |
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Nov 4 2010, 5:01 PM EDT
Finished it, and I enjoyed it thoroughly! =) Really great job mate. I tried to play the music in my head while the story went along and it really worked =) please keep them coming?
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toxic_shock |
14. RE: Ammo, Apocalypse, and Alcohol
May 7 2011, 12:32 AM EDT
So there it is, the third part, complete with corny subtitle. Make sure you have a drink when you start, its a long read, and while it doesn't build as fast as the last chapter, I think I did better work this time around. I tried to flesh out the supporting characters a bit more to help with the next round.
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Sharpie41 |
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May 7 2011, 1:06 PM EDT
"So there it is, the third part, complete with corny subtitle. Make sure you have a drink when you start, its a long read, and while it doesn't build as fast as the last chapter, I think I did better work this time around. I tried to flesh out the supporting characters a bit more to help with the next round."I've got one thing to say...I like it Do you find this valuable? |
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EdOfTheDead2 |
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May 8 2011, 1:32 PM EDT
Beautiful man... Beautiful.
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randomknife666 |
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May 8 2011, 1:34 PM EDT
Currently reading part 2, but it is friecken awesome. Do you find this valuable? |
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dooflauchwarrior |
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May 8 2011, 2:49 PM EDT
like it alot so far, im on part 2. even the title isn't bad.
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nate121 |
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May 8 2011, 3:06 PM EDT
finished part 3 toxic, nice work
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