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jdfcanada
jdfcanada
Nice story
Sep 12 2010, 1:15 PM EDT | Post edited: Sep 12 2010, 1:15 PM EDT
It's interesting that you chose to write it entirely in narrative fashion. Normally, critics tell authors to show us, not tell us, but you did a fairly good job anyways.

If you wanted to flesh it out and make it longer, I would add in dialogue. Do you find this valuable?    
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