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TandC
TandC
These Broken Streets
Nov 5 2010, 4:07 PM EDT | Post edited: Nov 5 2010, 4:07 PM EDT
Hey all, I was in chemistry class and I thought back to Ammo, Apocalypse and Alcohol and thought it was rather darn good. I thought, hey why not write an intro, see if the guys like it and if they do, follow it up?

Any feedback will be welcome =)

'Move it!' I yelled at the 8 people huddling in the corner, their eyes wide with fear. 'Move! Otherwise, we are going to be in a world of sh...'

There was a loud crash as one of them broke through the front door. I swung my Beretta 92SF to bear. I slowly exhaled and squeezed the trigger. The zombie made a lunge for my bare throat.

*CLICK*

This is not the beginning of my story, nor is it the end. 1  out of 1 found this valuable. Do you?    
Whybother08
Whybother08
1. RE: These Broken Streets
Nov 5 2010, 5:52 PM EDT | Post edited: Nov 5 2010, 5:52 PM EDT
Beretta 92*FS* Do you find this valuable?    
toxic_shock
toxic_shock
2. RE: These Broken Streets
Nov 5 2010, 6:40 PM EDT | Post edited: Nov 5 2010, 6:40 PM EDT
Hey, thanks! I really can't say if this is great one way or another with less than a paragraph. But go for it, start writing! Do you find this valuable?    
TandC
TandC
3. RE: These Broken Streets
Nov 5 2010, 6:42 PM EDT | Post edited: Nov 5 2010, 6:42 PM EDT
"Beretta 92*FS*"
Sorry, I didn't realise about the typo! I will be sure to fix this in the real story =) Do you find this valuable?    
TandC
TandC
4. RE: These Broken Streets
Nov 5 2010, 6:46 PM EDT | Post edited: Nov 5 2010, 6:46 PM EDT
By the way, I know I sound rather nooby here but, how do i post my story to the Zombie Fiction page itself? Cheers Do you find this valuable?    
toxic_shock
toxic_shock
5. RE: These Broken Streets
Nov 5 2010, 6:49 PM EDT | Post edited: Nov 5 2010, 6:49 PM EDT
Apply for writer-hood first. Then once granted, you can add pages. Do you find this valuable?    
TandC
TandC
6. RE: These Broken Streets
Nov 5 2010, 7:04 PM EDT | Post edited: Nov 5 2010, 7:04 PM EDT
"Apply for writer-hood first."
Writerhood? Man, I truly am showing my newness XD Do you find this valuable?    

EastCoaster9000
7. RE: These Broken Streets
Nov 5 2010, 7:54 PM EDT | Post edited: Nov 5 2010, 7:54 PM EDT
I see your a fan of his story.
As am I.
Welcome to the club. Do you find this valuable?    
TandC
TandC
8. RE: These Broken Streets
Nov 6 2010, 5:28 AM EDT | Post edited: Nov 6 2010, 5:28 AM EDT
"I see your a fan of his story.
As am I.
Welcome to the club."
I read the first chapter and was pretty much sucked in for the next 2 hours =) Do you find this valuable?    

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